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Federales (Haiku) by Bachus
Ray-Bans plus mustache Equals a car & bag search Ending at your rear The rubber glove snaps As I bend to touch my toes Liquid burritos Catholics with guns Witnessing my osmosis Time to try a bribe Justice can be found And purchased at the front desk For two hundred bucks

Up the ladder: nightly
Down the ladder: Angelic Fornication

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.230769
Weighted score: 6.630823
Overall Rank: 580
Posted: July 17, 2003 9:34 AM PDT; Last modified: July 17, 2003 9:34 AM PDT
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[8] richa @ 81.86.242.4 | 17-Jul-03/9:49 AM | Reply
like it, especially the first verse. I get searched less than I used to after I shaved my adolescent moustache.

set off an alarm today though, commandeered by some george michael alike security guard (must have been in it for the uniform) I had to laugh
[8] Terence @ 195.157.153.253 | 17-Jul-03/10:09 AM | Reply
Good.
[7] hobojo @ 166.94.9.205 | 18-Jul-03/7:41 AM | Reply
As always - a pleasure.
[9] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.166.57 | 18-Jul-03/9:09 PM | Reply
The rubber glove snaps
As I bend to touch my toes
Liquid burritos

-- i love this stanza.. ;P 9.
[0] Engelbert Humpalot @ 127.0.0.1 | 3-Feb-21/7:36 AM | Reply
rubbish
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