| Re: a comment on Always by hobojo |
19-Dec-08/2:14 PM |
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Your version is much better, yes. Changes the meaning a bit though. I know I am a terrible writer, but it is one of the many things I am trying to get better at. Thanks for taking the time to write your thoughts, I always enjoy reading your poems.
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| Re: a comment on Love doesn't cure IV injections of hate. by SupremeDreamer |
4-Dec-08/4:33 PM |
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| Re: a comment on About Death & Hell? Hell can be a State of Living. by Don-Quixote |
4-Dec-08/4:23 PM |
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I again come back to your poem... it really captures my current state, evaluating my inability to engage in life - thank you for writing this.
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| Re: Marrakech Watercolours by Caducus |
1-Dec-08/6:00 PM |
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| Re: Fine Line by sliver |
13-Nov-08/6:28 PM |
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Wish I had a sense of my fine line...
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| Re: Poetic Blue Justice by Dovina |
13-Nov-08/6:24 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Anorexia is good for the soul by hobojo |
13-Nov-08/6:22 PM |
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Anorexia being the opposite of an addiction to food, an addiction to being thin, which has been a part of my world with this self hate, not being desired blah blah stupid
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| Re: a comment on Anorexia is good for the soul by hobojo |
13-Nov-08/6:21 PM |
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I was comparing anorexia to an addiction to food and that starvation of this sort would be good for my soul - sorry to use the word offensively if I did so...
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| Re: The Deepest Depths by chesty82 |
10-Nov-08/5:50 PM |
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You have captured my year...
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| Re: a comment on One of the guys by hobojo |
1-Nov-08/4:46 PM |
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Sorry to post such personal poems - i made everything awkward in my group of friends and he is avoiding me - he did no wrong -
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| Re: My Dad's Armchair. by Bethy |
6-Sep-08/4:07 PM |
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My grandmother sits in my dad's old chair... this is very good and reminds me we all share such similar stories in life
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| Re: a comment on Time to leap by hobojo |
6-Sep-08/1:02 AM |
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Thank you - I agree with everything you recommended
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| Re: About Death & Hell? Hell can be a State of Living. by Don-Quixote |
12-Aug-08/12:15 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Fading Love by hobojo |
18-Nov-07/2:01 AM |
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| Re: NIGHTMILK SUNBLOOD by horus8 |
5-Sep-07/5:19 PM |
In all of my artistic endeavors, art, music, cooking, and writing, I do so for myself. It is an outlet, it cleanses my emotions, it teaches me something new, and it results in a creation. If someone else enjoys and benefits, wonderful. Ignore him.
I enjoyed this more than most of what I have read on this site.
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| Re: Bowling For Turpentine by horus8 |
29-Jul-04/10:01 PM |
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There is so much more wrong with Americans and their perceptions of what life is all about - oh do tell more.
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| Re: Saturn by Bachus |
29-Jul-04/9:51 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Hurt never dies by hobojo |
7-Nov-03/8:31 AM |
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Surrounded by calm - when your world is in turmoil but the world goes on - the feeling when you can't function but all others do.
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| Re: Never Love A Poet by Caducus |
7-Nov-03/8:06 AM |
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This reflects the communication barrier I have been dealing with lately - this resonates with regret - something I try never to feel - 10
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| Re: One Sided Love by Caducus |
24-Sep-03/11:28 AM |
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timing is essential with expressing words like love...
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