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| Re: The Freemasons by Bachus |
16-Jun-04/7:22 PM |
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Do you think that tho Pope hired the free masons to build cathedrals because of the designs? The free mason's don't have a lock on good architecture. And yes, the early bird does get the worm, but the second mouse gets the cheese. You know man, you may think you know, because you have all these <books>. But there is nothing about the free masons, the Knights of Templar, Cylomancy, or anything else of that nature written in a place where someone like you will be able to just go have a look see. Good bit of meandering thought tho'.
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| Re: for sharon by shazpen |
16-Jun-04/7:29 PM |
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Looking for the soul? She will never be the same. We can try to live with who she is now. Or...
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| Re: Summers Breath on my neck by unouluvme |
16-Jun-04/7:48 PM |
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Good image though, I guess you aren't as bad a poet as you think.
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| Re: Obituary for the Moon by wilco |
16-Jun-04/7:59 PM |
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You know, I've read this quite a few times now, and I like the first two stanza's, but I lost it or you lost it when you started in on the chorus. Could you try to find what you had when you started this and continue it as more of a poem than a song?
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| Re: West Coast Epilogue (Pseudo Triolet) by wilco |
16-Jun-04/9:39 PM |
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Yea, the original was better, the repetition just doesn't work here.
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16-Jun-04/9:41 PM |
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You write about each one as if tey were the only one. Kinda makes ya wonder. WHAZZUP?
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16-Jun-04/9:42 PM |
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Yes, but sometimes they go bad much sooner.
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| Re: love and hate by jessicasgurl |
17-Jun-04/4:11 PM |
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| Re: A Flower for Monet by Shuushin |
17-Jun-04/4:18 PM |
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Yes Yes, cudos. Very well done
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19-Jun-04/9:02 AM |
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Gee, you tend to get attached don't you?
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19-Jun-04/9:04 AM |
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Speechless, only 'cause I don't know what to say;}
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| Re: daughter by sarah |
19-Jun-04/9:06 AM |
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Being a single parent is tough. My sister is the same(except she has to deal with a boy)Great poem, hang in there!
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| Re: Phoebus by SupremeDreamer |
19-Jun-04/9:10 AM |
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I hope you didn't write this after reading a few of mine last night! So true, no matter how hard we try, we will always reveal at least a part of who we are in whatever we write. I think it is unavoidable, kinda like death.
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| Re: BLOBBY by MR Blobby |
19-Jun-04/9:12 AM |
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A great big ZERO, you will soon be #1 on the worst poem list.
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| Re: A single day by donmiguel1960 |
19-Jun-04/9:16 AM |
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Death can't be thwarted? other than that, 10, definitely.
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| Re: No choice in the matter by cedand1 |
21-Jun-04/8:00 PM |
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Yea, we've got a few of those poor fellows here in Colorado Springs too. Sucks to be a statue.
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| Re: The Thinker by cedand1 |
21-Jun-04/8:02 PM |
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Welcome to poem ranker. nice work, kinda nice to see some good poetry from a newby, I really enjoyed this one.
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| Re: Absurd by cedand1 |
21-Jun-04/8:03 PM |
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DAMN, I like it I like it alot.
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| Re: Sonnetias by MacFrantic |
21-Jun-04/8:07 PM |
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