on I don't know by Chasz Misleading
8 Jun 2004, 4:03 PM
Insecure
on some deleted poem
14 Jun 2004, 5:43 PM
superb, well done. I like how you refer to the heroes in the train more directly now
on some deleted poem
14 Jun 2004, 5:43 PM
Can you e-mail me the original so I can see the steps you took to revise?
on some deleted poem
14 Jun 2004, 5:48 PM
I set out to write that perfect poem once also. It must not have done it, she's gone.
on some deleted poem
13 Jun 2004, 9:18 AM
Damn. That sounds kinda painful.
on some deleted poem
13 Jun 2004, 9:22 AM
I enjoyed the end very much. The dead returning home.
on mutiny by Bill Z Bub
8 Jun 2004, 4:02 PM
I tink I can see it.
on some deleted poem
10 Jun 2004, 5:50 PM
Why be a bitch? you read my work long enough to give me a one and a 0, but no comments. If you dislike it that much just don't vote. unless you're one of those who is trying to win poemranker by eliminating all others.
on some deleted poem
8 Jun 2004, 7:00 PM
Cold you email the original to me if you still have it please? I have it somewhere but my poetry is as scattered as my mind. I hope to compare a work of mine to this masterpiece someday;/ we'll see.
on White Candle by crwncka1
8 Jun 2004, 7:03 PM
Black isn't a color, it's the lack of color. good words though.
on Basic by Chasz Misleading
8 Jun 2004, 4:04 PM
I doubt it, We can never see who someone is entirely.
on What ever happend to Kelly Green? by titan69
8 Jun 2004, 3:49 PM
Sad.
on some deleted poem
8 Jun 2004, 4:00 PM
Seriously? Do you read your history? In "freeing" the filipino's before WWII American soldiers slaughtered men, women and children, just like they did the Indians in our efforts to gain more ground. etc. etc.
In any war you have to convince yourself that your enemies are sub-human (makes it easier to kill'em)
In any war you have to convince yourself that your enemies are sub-human (makes it easier to kill'em)
on Suicide Girl by wilco
8 Jun 2004, 4:41 PM
A ten, for the quality, and another for those 5's
on The painted Chair by Sunshine Conkey
8 Jun 2004, 6:21 PM
How about titling it just 'the painted'? I really like the poem though. Everyone talks about their walls, this is original(At least to me)
on some deleted poem
8 Jun 2004, 6:23 PM
ouch. so the madman was seeking peace wih a gun in his hand?
on some deleted poem
8 Jun 2004, 6:29 PM
I wouldn't mind having that kind on Insurance
on some deleted poem
8 Jun 2004, 6:40 PM
Didn't care much for the poem. I think you might need to deal with a few issues. And don't try that shit in Colorado. We have what is called the 'Make My Day law'
If you show up here in my lovely home town, walk up to my door and threaten me with anything other than your mouth, I can blow your head off with my Hawkin .50 cal. and just walk away.
If you show up here in my lovely home town, walk up to my door and threaten me with anything other than your mouth, I can blow your head off with my Hawkin .50 cal. and just walk away.