| Re: What ever happend to Kelly Green? by titan69 |
8-Jun-04/3:49 PM |
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| Re: Fool by arduinn |
8-Jun-04/3:54 PM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
8-Jun-04/4:00 PM |
Seriously? Do you read your history? In "freeing" the filipino's before WWII American soldiers slaughtered men, women and children, just like they did the Indians in our efforts to gain more ground. etc. etc.
In any war you have to convince yourself that your enemies are sub-human (makes it easier to kill'em)
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| Re: mutiny by Bill Z Bub |
8-Jun-04/4:02 PM |
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| Re: I don't know by Chasz Misleading |
8-Jun-04/4:03 PM |
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| Re: Basic by Chasz Misleading |
8-Jun-04/4:04 PM |
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I doubt it, We can never see who someone is entirely.
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| Re: Suicide Girl by wilco |
8-Jun-04/4:41 PM |
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A ten, for the quality, and another for those 5's
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| Re: Linger on by sliver |
8-Jun-04/6:18 PM |
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| Re: The painted Chair by Sunshine Conkey |
8-Jun-04/6:21 PM |
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How about titling it just 'the painted'? I really like the poem though. Everyone talks about their walls, this is original(At least to me)
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
8-Jun-04/6:23 PM |
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ouch. so the madman was seeking peace wih a gun in his hand?
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
8-Jun-04/6:29 PM |
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I wouldn't mind having that kind on Insurance
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
8-Jun-04/6:40 PM |
Didn't care much for the poem. I think you might need to deal with a few issues. And don't try that shit in Colorado. We have what is called the 'Make My Day law'
If you show up here in my lovely home town, walk up to my door and threaten me with anything other than your mouth, I can blow your head off with my Hawkin .50 cal. and just walk away.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
8-Jun-04/7:00 PM |
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Cold you email the original to me if you still have it please? I have it somewhere but my poetry is as scattered as my mind. I hope to compare a work of mine to this masterpiece someday;/ we'll see.
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| Re: White Candle by crwncka1 |
8-Jun-04/7:03 PM |
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Black isn't a color, it's the lack of color. good words though.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
10-Jun-04/5:50 PM |
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Why be a bitch? you read my work long enough to give me a one and a 0, but no comments. If you dislike it that much just don't vote. unless you're one of those who is trying to win poemranker by eliminating all others.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
13-Jun-04/9:18 AM |
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Damn. That sounds kinda painful.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
13-Jun-04/9:22 AM |
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I enjoyed the end very much. The dead returning home.
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14-Jun-04/5:43 PM |
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superb, well done. I like how you refer to the heroes in the train more directly now
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
14-Jun-04/5:43 PM |
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Can you e-mail me the original so I can see the steps you took to revise?
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
14-Jun-04/5:48 PM |
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I set out to write that perfect poem once also. It must not have done it, she's gone.
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