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2-Jun-04/9:10 PM |
Yes Bratsy, you are not alone. Try living with the memories here.
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Re: One O Five in the A.M. by Enkidu |
2-Jun-04/9:12 PM |
This is poetry? really? don't want to hurt your feelings man, but this don't cut it, not at all. I won't vote
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Re: Desire by mk32 |
2-Jun-04/9:18 PM |
SHIT, I think this is going on my favorite list. Thanks.
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2-Jun-04/9:30 PM |
A sad commentary on todays youth.
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5-Jun-04/7:47 AM |
Our soldiers do need many prayers Bratsy.A great poem. You might consider his greatest fear to have his body left in foreign soil instead of being brought home.
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6-Jun-04/7:05 PM |
Line 2 stanza 2, at dawn, fix it and I will give my 10 and my comment.
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6-Jun-04/7:45 PM |
Ask NoSage he might give you one.
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Re: Decks of Cards (So Long to the City) by wilco |
6-Jun-04/7:51 PM |
I'm looking forward to reading obituary to the moon. That makes it hrd to speak on this piece. I see that you are a musician. read a few af mine and let me know if I have any hope as a lyricist?
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Re: Obituary for the Moon by wilco |
6-Jun-04/7:55 PM |
Sloppy what? Nothing I saw....10,10.
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6-Jun-04/8:07 PM |
I can see her, silouetted on the shore, pearlessence. In the fog. And I can understand. But those mountains have an addiction. I know, I live in the shadows of the falling sun. I love.
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Re: One Week Ago by Miggy |
7-Jun-04/8:29 PM |
I could see this on the radio, Not that it's all that great(No offense), but it's better than alot of stuff I hear.
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Re: Writers' Block by wilco |
7-Jun-04/8:31 PM |
Must've been hard to think up this one.
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Re: The curse of language and other scattered thoughts by Y2kSlamPoet |
7-Jun-04/8:40 PM |
We don't acquire our distincion of morality by descent, but rather, by rising above our nature.
And you know that giving in to your basest desires and needs is not the way we aspire to perfection. I have found that striving to achieve pure charity is the most fulfilling thing I have ever done in my life. Like you, I don't claim to know it all, but the path has been laid out for me, I need only the courage to walk it.
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7-Jun-04/8:44 PM |
all the pain I caused
these salty tears make me choke
?? Whats up sexy?
Loving you With All my heart?
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7-Jun-04/8:46 PM |
I speak your name with quivering lips.
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7-Jun-04/9:23 PM |
What are you still doing up young lady? If you never did see eye to eye what was the basis of your friendship?
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Re: Bitter bacardi makes the black stones dance. by SupremeDreamer |
7-Jun-04/9:30 PM |
See Waiting for the worm, By yours truly. You might like it.
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Re: Isn't it a wonder by caitydee |
7-Jun-04/9:31 PM |
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Re: USS Pride by DR Limerick |
7-Jun-04/9:42 PM |
I saw it. Hell of an anchor. Is that like sea rage or something?
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Re: Doesn't Hurt Me by Miggy |
8-Jun-04/3:45 PM |
I don't see it being any better than all the poems you have given me O's on. I hadn't noticed until lately, and I have been giving you 8's and 9's. Silly me.
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