| Re: am i on speaker phone? good~ by peaceseeker |
24-May-04/9:12 PM |
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I do like the imagery though, especially the foam spraying. 8
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24-May-04/9:13 PM |
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If she cooked the pancakes? mmm.
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| Re: screaming in silence by siyado |
24-May-04/9:15 PM |
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Great! I love it. Especially the way you closed it.
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| Re: dancing on air by killingjuliet |
30-May-04/6:43 AM |
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| Re: lost in the riptide by killingjuliet |
30-May-04/6:44 AM |
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I couldn't seem to find the flow.
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| Re: you by killingjuliet |
30-May-04/6:47 AM |
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This one I like. good images, and I can almost smell the lilac.10
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| Re: My first Haiku by DJCopasetic |
30-May-04/6:48 AM |
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Now that I'm sober I can read these! That whiskey kinda hurt.
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| Re: Voices Within by DJCopasetic |
30-May-04/6:49 AM |
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| Re: Heaven Out Here by wilco |
2-Jun-04/3:08 PM |
Very well done. I have felt that same feeling, in almost the same circumstances. But not so eloquently.
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| Re: The Red Basket by pain killer |
2-Jun-04/3:12 PM |
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How can she be lonely with all these emotional chickens about?
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| Re: The Angel and The Ass by pain killer |
2-Jun-04/3:16 PM |
Good, I don't suppose the angel felt the attraction eh?
Maybe if she'd needed to pack in to the mountains, you know - he could carry her celestial food.
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| Re: Dear Lord, by INTRANSIT |
2-Jun-04/3:21 PM |
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My new favorite. Ten does not begin. I especially like the scroll of life. If you are speaking to God, then your and thee should be capitalized. Fantastic writing.
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| Re: The Trainspotter by the codeine kid |
2-Jun-04/3:23 PM |
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I guess my life isn't that boring then.
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| Re: Sisters of mercy by titan69 |
2-Jun-04/3:26 PM |
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They walked as if robotic? seems to fit better.
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| Re: Know Me by caitydee |
2-Jun-04/8:22 PM |
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I shall comment caitydee, A nice piece. I hope it worked out.10
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| Re: The Babe in the Alligator Pajamas by caitydee |
2-Jun-04/8:31 PM |
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Funny how children can make you completely reconsider your idea of life huh? 10
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2-Jun-04/8:38 PM |
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Fanf'ntastic. I could hear the coronet staining in the background and taste the agave worm.
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| Re: Fire, Water, and Blood by Katzclear |
2-Jun-04/8:48 PM |
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Good imagery,I think tadpole refers to baptism. When ya gonna submit some more?
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2-Jun-04/8:49 PM |
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| Re: Don't Say You Understand by cuddlytiger17 |
2-Jun-04/8:55 PM |
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