on am i on speaker phone? good~ by peaceseeker
24 May 2004, 9:12 PM
I do like the imagery though, especially the foam spraying. 8
on some deleted poem
24 May 2004, 9:13 PM
If she cooked the pancakes? mmm.
on screaming in silence by siyado
24 May 2004, 9:15 PM
Great! I love it. Especially the way you closed it.
on Don't Say You Understand by cuddlytiger17
2 Jun 2004, 8:55 PM
I don't understand ;)
on dancing on air by killingjuliet
30 May 2004, 6:43 AM
I return your 6.
on lost in the riptide by killingjuliet
30 May 2004, 6:44 AM
I couldn't seem to find the flow.
on you by killingjuliet
30 May 2004, 6:47 AM
This one I like. good images, and I can almost smell the lilac.10
on My first Haiku by DJCopasetic
30 May 2004, 6:48 AM
Now that I'm sober I can read these! That whiskey kinda hurt.
on Voices Within by DJCopasetic
30 May 2004, 6:49 AM
Yep.
on The Babe in the Alligator Pajamas by caitydee
2 Jun 2004, 8:31 PM
Funny how children can make you completely reconsider your idea of life huh? 10
on some deleted poem
2 Jun 2004, 8:38 PM
Fanf'ntastic. I could hear the coronet staining in the background and taste the agave worm.
on Fire, Water, and Blood by Katzclear
2 Jun 2004, 8:48 PM
Good imagery,I think tadpole refers to baptism. When ya gonna submit some more?
on some deleted poem
2 Jun 2004, 8:49 PM
hmmm.
on Heaven Out Here by wilco
2 Jun 2004, 3:08 PM
Very well done. I have felt that same feeling, in almost the same circumstances. But not so eloquently.
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on The Red Basket by pain killer
2 Jun 2004, 3:12 PM
How can she be lonely with all these emotional chickens about?
on The Angel and The Ass by pain killer
2 Jun 2004, 3:16 PM
Good, I don't suppose the angel felt the attraction eh?
Maybe if she'd needed to pack in to the mountains, you know - he could carry her celestial food.
Maybe if she'd needed to pack in to the mountains, you know - he could carry her celestial food.
on Dear Lord, by INTRANSIT
2 Jun 2004, 3:21 PM
My new favorite. Ten does not begin. I especially like the scroll of life. If you are speaking to God, then your and thee should be capitalized. Fantastic writing.
on The Trainspotter by the codeine kid
2 Jun 2004, 3:23 PM
I guess my life isn't that boring then.
on Sisters of mercy by titan69
2 Jun 2004, 3:26 PM
They walked as if robotic? seems to fit better.