poemranker ::Know Me by caitydee

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Free verse № 103261

Know Me

Member since 2004 · Posted 25 May 2004 · 5 comments

I don’t know how I got here Apparently I have an unknown superpower But I don’t understand how I became invisible Can you not see? Do you not feel me anymore? Has my touch worn off And my voice left your heart My imprint on your soul must not have been strong But you- You placed an eye on my heart And now it burns And you- You let me through your barriers and broke down mine And you- You smiled and I laughed And we were happy right? And you- Well maybe I just don’t know you And maybe you never knew me Then let me tell you- I don’t want to shout “Love me-see me-need me Let me be ENOUGH”

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5 comments

[n/a] caitydee 29-May-04/8:06 PM Reply
no comments??
[10] sliver 2-Jun-04/8:22 PM Reply
I shall comment caitydee, A nice piece. I hope it worked out.10
[n/a] caitydee › sliver 2-Jun-04/8:51 PM Reply
Ya know, I'm not exactly sure if it worked out or not, I think I am still trying to figure out if it is good or bad, change is like that. But thanks!
[9] horus8 2-Jun-04/8:51 PM Reply
Fluff
[n/a] caitydee › horus8 6-Jun-04/8:57 PM Reply
My life is fluff, huh?