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Know Me (Free verse) by caitydee I donât know how I got here
Apparently I have an unknown superpower
But I donât understand how I became invisible
Can you not see?
Do you not feel me anymore?
Has my touch worn off
And my voice left your heart
My imprint on your soul must not have been strong
But you-
You placed an eye on my heart
And now it burns
And you-
You let me through your barriers
and broke down mine
And you-
You smiled and I laughed
And we were happy right?
And you-
Well maybe I just donât know you
And maybe you never knew me
Then let me tell you-
I donât want to shout
âLove me-see me-need me
Let me be ENOUGHâ
Up the ladder:
Ode to my Poopy
Down the ladder:
Timing
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Posted: May 25, 2004 10:20 PM PDT; Last modified: May 25, 2004 10:20 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.576303 Overall Rank: 2385 Comments:
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caitydee @ 64.12.116.70
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29-May-04/8:06 PM
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no comments??
I shall comment caitydee, A nice piece. I hope it worked out.10
Ya know, I'm not exactly sure if it worked out or not, I think I am still trying to figure out if it is good or bad, change is like that. But thanks!
Fluff
My life is fluff, huh?
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