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you (Free verse) by killingjuliet
you do not sparkle like the rest
you wear no cloak of ivory upon your chest
i rake the garden of dandelion and weed
and there i found your seed
you are what i need.
you do not strive to embrace or enjoy
you do not seek attention of others employ
you do not bring me to my knees
you do not lie or moan or grieve
and i think you are just what i need...
you are simple enough to rest
while i struggle and digress
your eyes are bright as midday sun
your skin is plain, your song unsung
you are only common at best
but that's enough to pass my test
- a feat of iron will and jest
i rake the garden of dandelion and weed
and there i found your seed
among the honey and the bees
twisted in the lilac and the trees
- and you are what i need.
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.5
Weighted score: 5.6723537
Overall Rank: 2059
Posted: May 30, 2004 12:33 AM PDT; Last modified: May 30, 2004 12:33 AM PDT
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