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Leg (Free verse) by jessicazee Mine are smooth, naked
hambones, cricket's legs.
Under cool sheets
they whistle and flicker.
Enough of these nature-
girls and their all
"beauty of a furry thigh"
I like the glide -
the groom, my stride.
Up the ladder:
Silver Sword
Down the ladder:
Breaks Between The Lines
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Posted: October 20, 2005 9:47 PM PDT; Last modified: October 20, 2005 9:47 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.6723537 Overall Rank: 2045 The following users have marked this poem on their favorites list:
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It's uncertain whether the legs in the first part are yours or his. It's a sexy romp in any case.
It's uncertain whether the legs in the first part are yours or his. It's a sexy romp in any case.
nice.
What? No vvvvipvvvvvipvvvvvvvip of corduroy?
Not that I necessarily disagree with the poem (especially since I've never seen your legs), but whether or not a hairy female leg is nice or not depends on the shape of the leg. As a rule, hairy ones will be just as nice when shaved, though the reverse is not necessarily true.
I love your poetry.
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- She's got legs...
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...and she kno-ows how to use them...