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Leg (Free verse) by jessicazee
Mine are smooth, naked hambones, cricket's legs. Under cool sheets they whistle and flicker. Enough of these nature- girls and their all "beauty of a furry thigh" I like the glide - the groom, my stride.

Down the ladder: The Tale of Hominus Ominus

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.5
Weighted score: 5.6723537
Overall Rank: 2034
Posted: October 20, 2005 9:47 PM PDT; Last modified: October 20, 2005 9:47 PM PDT
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[10] zodiac @ 217.144.7.195 | 21-Oct-05/9:38 AM | Reply
Wow, sexy. Now I'm all like,

(chugachugachugachugachugachugachugachugachugachuga)

- She's got legs...

(chugachugachugachugachugachugachugachugachugachuga)

...and she kno-ows how to use them...
[9] Dovina @ 69.175.32.104 | 21-Oct-05/10:10 AM | Reply
It's uncertain whether the legs in the first part are yours or his. It's a sexy romp in any case.
[9] Dovina @ 69.175.32.104 | 21-Oct-05/10:10 AM | Reply
It's uncertain whether the legs in the first part are yours or his. It's a sexy romp in any case.
[n/a] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 21-Oct-05/11:34 AM | Reply
nice.
[9] INTRANSIT @ 12.36.196.2 | 21-Oct-05/2:01 PM | Reply
What? No vvvvipvvvvvipvvvvvvvip of corduroy?
[7] Tintagiles @ 207.179.148.78 | 22-Oct-05/7:14 PM | Reply
Not that I necessarily disagree with the poem (especially since I've never seen your legs), but whether or not a hairy female leg is nice or not depends on the shape of the leg. As a rule, hairy ones will be just as nice when shaved, though the reverse is not necessarily true.
[10] half.italian @ 76.172.249.205 | 17-Feb-07/3:55 PM | Reply
I love your poetry.
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