regarding some deleted poem...	13-May-04/6:42 PM
I like the wet sock on the line analogy-hell I loved the whole first stanza, alot. The rest was o.k., but it didn't keep the grip that the first stanza had. Overall 8, but a good one. I visit my grandma in Douds Iowa, so I can relate to the humidity, the pit, etc. Talk about cooling off in a creek on the way home . Perhaps another find? (Indian artifacts, etc.)
Re: us by tatteredatlas	13-May-04/8:08 PM
concrete-I think
Re: Speaking Dog by MacFrantic	13-May-04/8:10 PM
I feel your pain. If I ask my dog what's on a house, She says a rooooof> she can talk too
Re: an ode to hypatia by francis nor capule	13-May-04/8:12 PM
Must be a drought,
Re: She Dreams of Yesterday by Phalkon	13-May-04/8:29 PM
She's probably better off than most.
Re: Waste Replacing by Phalkon	13-May-04/8:31 PM
Apocalyptic, or somthing. I like this one.
Re: In the Land of Bob by Bobjim	14-May-04/11:37 AM
Where's Saturday and Sunday? lost in the mind of Bob?
Re: The Ballad of Fraser Allonby Q.C., Barrister-At-Law by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w	14-May-04/11:39 AM
I actually liked reading this one, Somebody shoot me!
Re: Bashing through the woods by INTRANSIT	14-May-04/11:41 AM
What about the gay snakes? you left out the gay snakes!
Re: No name for the poem...Lost in emptiness by Prince of Void	16-May-04/7:41 PM
Then one would think you might know how to spell vein.
Re: Faggots get what they deserve! by J.B. Manning	16-May-04/7:53 PM
HOMOPHOBIC, aren't we all. I couldn't stop laughing!!! A better deserved ten has never been issued. wheeeeee. I guesss they'll think I'm a fag now too, screw 'em I loved this.
regarding some deleted poem...	20-May-04/12:50 PM
I can't really relate this year, but Colorado is still pretty cool. June'll probably be a cooker. Still I have big tree's beside my house so it's almost always cool inside
Re: Unwed by gilded in gold	20-May-04/12:53 PM
All moments are painted I think, you just can't always distinguish the colors. I like this, let's see some more?
Re: Just Like Before by cuddlytiger17	20-May-04/12:55 PM
Remind me not to piss you off, or teach you how to load black powder.
regarding some deleted poem...	21-May-04/9:41 AM
O.K, time for my input. Give a little more volume to the poem, fill it up so the rhyme scheme doesn't sound forced to the magus. Good Idea for a poem tho.
Re: Bed by gilded in gold	21-May-04/12:31 PM
Hard for my limited mind to follow. But I think I like what it says about a child's soul.(Personal interpretation)
Re: leavetaking by daniella	24-May-04/5:04 PM
Well said.
Re: and you by edwardo	24-May-04/9:07 PM
What?
regarding some deleted poem...	24-May-04/9:08 PM
Hmm...
Re: Only I wish I could say.. by PunkyPanda	24-May-04/9:10 PM
the third stanza is um, no bueno, si? other than that, probably a 6 or 7.