on leavetaking by daniella
24 May 2004, 5:04 PM
Well said.
on some deleted poem
24 May 2004, 9:08 PM
Hmm...
on Only I wish I could say.. by PunkyPanda
24 May 2004, 9:10 PM
the third stanza is um, no bueno, si? other than that, probably a 6 or 7.
on some deleted poem
13 May 2004, 6:42 PM
I like the wet sock on the line analogy-hell I loved the whole first stanza, alot. The rest was o.k., but it didn't keep the grip that the first stanza had. Overall 8, but a good one. I visit my grandma in Douds Iowa, so I can relate to the humidity, the pit, etc.
Talk about cooling off in a creek on the way home . Perhaps another find? (Indian artifacts, etc.)
Talk about cooling off in a creek on the way home . Perhaps another find? (Indian artifacts, etc.)
on us by tatteredatlas
13 May 2004, 8:08 PM
concrete-I think
on Speaking Dog by MacFrantic
13 May 2004, 8:10 PM
I feel your pain. If I ask my dog what's on a house,
She says a rooooof> she can talk too
She says a rooooof> she can talk too
on an ode to hypatia by francis nor capule
13 May 2004, 8:12 PM
Must be a drought,
on She Dreams of Yesterday by Phalkon
13 May 2004, 8:29 PM
She's probably better off than most.
on Waste Replacing by Phalkon
13 May 2004, 8:31 PM
Apocalyptic, or somthing. I like this one.
on In the Land of Bob by Bobjim
14 May 2004, 11:37 AM
Where's Saturday and Sunday?
lost in the mind of Bob?
lost in the mind of Bob?
on The Ballad of Fraser Allonby Q.C., Barrister-At-Law by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w
14 May 2004, 11:39 AM
I actually liked reading this one, Somebody shoot me!
on Bashing through the woods by INTRANSIT
14 May 2004, 11:41 AM
What about the gay snakes? you left out the gay snakes!
on No name for the poem...Lost in emptiness by Prince of Void
16 May 2004, 7:41 PM
Then one would think you might know how to spell vein.
on Faggots get what they deserve! by J.B. Manning
16 May 2004, 7:53 PM
HOMOPHOBIC, aren't we all. I couldn't stop laughing!!!
A better deserved ten has never been issued. wheeeeee.
I guesss they'll think I'm a fag now too, screw 'em I loved this.
A better deserved ten has never been issued. wheeeeee.
I guesss they'll think I'm a fag now too, screw 'em I loved this.
on some deleted poem
20 May 2004, 12:50 PM
I can't really relate this year, but Colorado is still pretty cool. June'll probably be a cooker. Still I have big tree's beside my house so it's almost always cool inside
on Unwed by gilded in gold
20 May 2004, 12:53 PM
All moments are painted I think, you just can't always distinguish the colors. I like this, let's see some more?
on Just Like Before by cuddlytiger17
20 May 2004, 12:55 PM
Remind me not to piss you off, or teach you how to load black powder.
on some deleted poem
21 May 2004, 9:41 AM
O.K, time for my input. Give a little more volume to the poem, fill it up so the rhyme scheme doesn't sound forced to the magus. Good Idea for a poem tho.
on Bed by gilded in gold
21 May 2004, 12:31 PM
Hard for my limited mind to follow. But I think I like what it says about a child's soul.(Personal interpretation)