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and you (Free verse) by edwardo
you carve a mirror into a block of ice then call it me
Up the ladder: We are what we hold
Down the ladder: Curtained Beef
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.2222223
Weighted score: 5.611111
Overall Rank: 2270
Posted: May 24, 2004 8:57 PM PDT; Last modified: May 24, 2004 8:57 PM PDT
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Comments:
[4] sliver @ 63.190.81.32 | 24-May-04/9:07 PM | Reply
What?
[5] zodiac @ 65.161.41.48 | 25-May-04/4:58 AM | Reply
the very picture of "stellar".
[8] edpeterson @ 68.79.15.13 | 25-May-04/5:27 AM | Reply
i like it
[8] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.130.62.63 | 25-May-04/10:39 AM | Reply
Neato
[9] INTRANSIT @ 152.163.252.165 | 6-Jun-04/6:30 AM | Reply
Sometimes,
a firecracker
resonates
like a bomb.
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