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us (Free verse) by tatteredatlas me: Â Â Â Â Â hello
        hello      :you
me: Â Â Â Â you are
      like stars
      and whales
      fairy tales,
      Princess.
       i dream     :you
      it seems
       for you
      only you,
       always.
me:   nightly rightly   :you
      between
me       &         you
       are
       our
     words smiles
     kisses miles
       of
       love
    porcelain tiles
     romance piles
       sing-
       ing
me: Â Â Â Â you
        me       :you
     (y)m(o)e(u)
        us
Up the ladder:
Call me Floyed
Down the ladder:
A Lover's Lament
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Posted: May 13, 2004 12:23 PM PDT; Last modified: May 13, 2004 12:24 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.9602656 Overall Rank: 8658 Comments:
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sliver @ 63.190.73.71
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13-May-04/8:08 PM
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concrete-I think
you are
like stars and whales fairy tales, i like that part just cus its cute....... kinda reminds me of the rhyme what are like girls made of lil girls are made of sugar and spice and everything nice. i think your poem is fairly good 7 133 view(s)
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