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Member since 2004 · Posted 13 May 2004 · Edited 13 May 2004 · 2 comments

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[7] sliver 13-May-04/8:08 PM Reply

concrete-I think

[7] SweetJuliet10 13-May-04/11:35 PM Reply

you are
like stars
and whales
fairy tales,

i like that part just cus its cute....... kinda reminds me of the rhyme what are like girls made of
lil girls are made of
sugar
and spice
and everything nice.

i think your poem is fairly good 7