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us (Free verse) by tatteredatlas

me:           hello               hello           :you me:         you are             like stars             and whales            fairy tales,             Princess.              i dream         :you             it seems              for you             only you,              always. me:     nightly rightly    :you             between me             &               you               are               our           words smiles           kisses miles               of              love         porcelain tiles          romance piles               sing-              ing me:         you                me             :you           (y)m(o)e(u)                us

SweetJuliet10 13-May-04/11:35 PM
you are
like stars
and whales
fairy tales,

i like that part just cus its cute....... kinda reminds me of the rhyme what are like girls made of
lil girls are made of
sugar
and spice
and everything nice.

i think your poem is fairly good 7




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