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Free verse № 102747

Bed

Member since 2004 · Posted 20 May 2004 · 2 comments

A solitary blue heaven :nurses the soul's hermit, honesty with stars aligned and memories fresh (pure like water) :cradles fear and lays casualties to rest with life self work and other 4-letter words while dreams rape a sponge heart.

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[2] Jeremi B. Handrinos 20-May-04/8:14 PM Reply
Sponge, yes, brilliant... 2.
[10] sliver 21-May-04/12:31 PM Reply
Hard for my limited mind to follow. But I think I like what it says about a child's soul.(Personal interpretation)