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Bed (Free verse) by gilded in gold A solitary blue
heaven
:nurses
the
soul's hermit,
honesty
with
stars aligned
and
memories fresh
(pure like water)
:cradles
fear and lays
casualties to rest
with
life
self
work
and other 4-letter words
while dreams
rape
a sponge heart.
Up the ladder:
Unmistakably Mistaken
Down the ladder:
The Red Chain
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Posted: May 20, 2004 2:52 PM PDT; Last modified: May 20, 2004 2:52 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.9103527 Overall Rank: 9677 Comments:
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Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.130.62.63
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20-May-04/8:14 PM
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Sponge, yes, brilliant... 2.
Hard for my limited mind to follow. But I think I like what it says about a child's soul.(Personal interpretation)
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