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Bed (Free verse) by gilded in gold
A solitary blue heaven :nurses the soul's hermit, honesty with stars aligned and memories fresh (pure like water) :cradles fear and lays casualties to rest with life self work and other 4-letter words while dreams rape a sponge heart.

Up the ladder: A short trip home
Down the ladder: The Escape

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Weighted score: 4.9103527
Overall Rank: 9644
Posted: May 20, 2004 2:52 PM PDT; Last modified: May 20, 2004 2:52 PM PDT
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[2] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.130.62.63 | 20-May-04/8:14 PM | Reply
Sponge, yes, brilliant... 2.
[10] sliver @ 63.190.73.252 | 21-May-04/12:31 PM | Reply
Hard for my limited mind to follow. But I think I like what it says about a child's soul.(Personal interpretation)
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