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Just Like Before (Free verse) by cuddlytiger17
You deceived me just like before
Told me those times would be no more
Said that you werenât like the rest
And that this was for the best
But you're just a hypocrite
With lines so easily spit
You ridicule me for everything Iâve done
You might as well just hand me the gun
Because you're pushing me to the limit
And I canât take any more of it
You're destroying me day by day
Yet you expect me to stay
You're calling me the crazy one
But Iâd only be crazy if I DIDNâT run
You say you're afraid Iâll harm myself
But staying hereâs suicide in itself
I think itâs fairly obvious to us all
That my leaving shouldnât be stalled
Because this was all a big mistake
And this tormented soul's about to break.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6
Weighted score: 5.190725
Overall Rank: 4725
Posted: May 18, 2004 6:12 PM PDT; Last modified: May 18, 2004 6:12 PM PDT
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It's called the "John K Rhyming Dictionary For Beginners" and it's posted at the following link:
http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.j
I would definitely visit that page and add it to my favorites if I were you. Thanks, and keep on writing!
You're welcome.