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Just Like Before (Free verse) by cuddlytiger17

You deceived me just like before Told me those times would be no more Said that you weren’t like the rest And that this was for the best But you're just a hypocrite With lines so easily spit You ridicule me for everything I’ve done You might as well just hand me the gun Because you're pushing me to the limit And I can’t take any more of it You're destroying me day by day Yet you expect me to stay You're calling me the crazy one But I’d only be crazy if I DIDN’T run You say you're afraid I’ll harm myself But staying here’s suicide in itself I think it’s fairly obvious to us all That my leaving shouldn’t be stalled Because this was all a big mistake And this tormented soul's about to break.

zodiac 19-May-04/1:36 PM
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