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Just Like Before (Free verse) by cuddlytiger17

You deceived me just like before Told me those times would be no more Said that you weren’t like the rest And that this was for the best But you're just a hypocrite With lines so easily spit You ridicule me for everything I’ve done You might as well just hand me the gun Because you're pushing me to the limit And I can’t take any more of it You're destroying me day by day Yet you expect me to stay You're calling me the crazy one But I’d only be crazy if I DIDN’T run You say you're afraid I’ll harm myself But staying here’s suicide in itself I think it’s fairly obvious to us all That my leaving shouldn’t be stalled Because this was all a big mistake And this tormented soul's about to break.

cuddlytiger17 19-May-04/5:16 PM
Thanks guys, but these still aren't new ones. I've been working on a few here and there, but nothing I'm willing to post. I appreciate the encouragement and suggestions, it really does help.




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