poemranker ::Shocks by Chasz Misleading

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Free verse № 106931

Shocks

Member since 2004 · Posted 30 Jun 2004 · Edited 30 Jun 2004 · 1 comment

Please, Please, Keep Away DO not TOUCH MAY CAUSE SEVERE HARM This sign I always read driving by the farms and livestock in my lackadaisical, enchanted youth And this... almost dead, Jangle screeched life back in 5 feet away please Don't look directly Your eyes may singe Don't touch it either You may get infected with it's malodorous, fetid of a being Not exactly HIV it lessens the essence not the extent Whatever you do do Not go in it will be fatal

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[7] Dovina 2-Jul-04/12:47 PM Reply
Life is fatal.