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Shocks (Free verse) by Chasz Misleading
Please, Please, Keep Away DO not TOUCH MAY CAUSE SEVERE HARM This sign I always read driving by the farms and livestock in my lackadaisical, enchanted youth And this... almost dead, Jangle screeched life back in 5 feet away please Don't look directly Your eyes may singe Don't touch it either You may get infected with it's malodorous, fetid of a being Not exactly HIV it lessens the essence not the extent Whatever you do do Not go in it will be fatal

Up the ladder: Guarded Fool
Down the ladder: Returning Home

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6
Weighted score: 5.190725
Overall Rank: 4679
Posted: June 30, 2004 5:41 PM PDT; Last modified: June 30, 2004 5:54 PM PDT
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[7] Dovina @ 24.52.157.176 | 2-Jul-04/12:47 PM | Reply
Life is fatal.
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