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Only I wish I could say.. (Free verse) by PunkyPanda
I can't go on without you, I'm too weak.
I can't say those words to you, they're too hard to speak.
Am I that good at hiding the secret, the one between two friends?
The friends you said we'd be until the very end?
It's time for me to come outwith it, but I don't think I can.
I'm afraid of losing our friendship, I, which you will ban
My breath's getting shorter, faster beats my chest.
I come out with "I" but I can't say the rest.
Your eyes grow weary, you put your arm around me.
I look in your eyes, and suddenly I can see.
That what I want to say to you, you want to say to me.
I finally say "love" and the whole world slows down.
the last word, I need say, before in my fears I drown.
"You" there, it's out, I can breath, I can feel my heart again. Will we
still be friends 'till the very end?
I look at you once more in your eyes so blue, Then I hear the sweetest
words ever,
"I love you too"
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Arithmetic Mean: 1.75
Weighted score: 4.6125903
Overall Rank: 12469
Posted: May 24, 2004 9:58 AM PDT; Last modified: July 12, 2005 11:29 PM PDT
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