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fake (Free verse) by eliznhaz I don't wanna be full of hostility for anyone but its to late
Angry and abandon beatin and pushed around
One day I'm just gonna break free from this fake smile
And I'll show you just how fake this smile can be
And i'll see if you again sit and laugh at me
your life is whats nothing more then a joke to all that see
Up the ladder:
Bitches
Down the ladder:
Diary of sorrow....
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Posted: May 3, 2005 2:29 PM PDT; Last modified: May 5, 2005 8:05 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.6125903 Overall Rank: 12466 Comments:
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"abandon" should be "abandoned."
"beatin" should be "beaten."
That's as far as I'm going.