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Waste Replacing

by Phalkon

Member since 2004 · Posted 13 May 2004 · 14 comments

winds are blowing, so much colder fragile hands caress my face footsteps echo in the distance marking this, my fall from grace time is wasting, waste replacing everything is wearing down lights are burning, barren yearning night falls on a somber town... bloodied knaves in sultry caves their liquids drip from tired hands sorrowed cries as people die the tears and blood engulf the lands war and illness kill the census pestilence, the people die thousands crying, millions dying all survivors asking why... sun goes down, the pain surrounds eternal fear comes to my door darkness falls, the nightlife calls and creatures move across my fear must escape this cold dark rape the evil comes surrounding me cannot wait, anticipate for anywhere i'd rather be...

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14 comments

[10] Stephen Robins 13-May-04/6:52 AM Reply
The title and the first three words made me believe this lyric was about the coversion of bile into feaces in the lower abdomanal tract. Reading the rest of this sorry excuse of a lyric led me to believe that you spend a lot of time playing warhammer in a darkened room with your imaginary friend Peter.

[n/a] Phalkon › Stephen Robins 13-May-04/9:08 AM Reply
actually, i'm not much into games... what type is warhammer?
[10] Stephen Robins › Phalkon 13-May-04/2:02 PM Reply
Ohh it's great you can be an ork and sometimes a troll and you roll dice and move figurines across a plaster of paris board shaped like a huge mountain of death! and then you roll the dice again to see whether you have found the sack of magic axes which allow you +3 attack points against orks but only if they roll three three's in three rows and then you can access the tower where the dragon lives and then you can try and steal her golden dragon eggs and if you can do that you get double wings and if your get double winges you will probalably cum all over your desk and then your Mother will walk in and ban you from warhammer for a week and you will go out into daylight without your +8 magic turbo shield and will be destroyed by the local bullies who have been drinking cider and fornicating with their shell suit clad tartish girlfriends and then you will go through life a bitter man who will go on to be a clerk and feel that your better because you earn more money than those losers who beat you up and you will buy a real set of magic axes and go and kill those people who teased you and then you will be sent to purgatory level three and you will spend your holidays in Thailand creaming over ladyboys and then you will be dead of AIDS. And you will have failed in your quest to free the tabletop of orks and wizards and trolls and your ejaculent
[n/a] wilco › Stephen Robins 13-May-04/2:09 PM Reply
wtf...
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › wilco 13-May-04/2:13 PM Reply
yeah lol i mean wtf seriously wtf is this a poetry forum or wtf comeon guys wtf lets be serious ok?
[n/a] wilco › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 13-May-04/2:35 PM Reply
seriously.
[10] Stephen Robins › wilco 14-May-04/9:49 AM Reply
You are a cockwatcher.
[n/a] Phalkon › Stephen Robins 13-May-04/4:55 PM Reply
wow, sounds like you've had this happen to you before...
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. › Phalkon 13-May-04/5:02 PM Reply
Limpest possible reply.
[n/a] Blindpoetry › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 13-May-04/6:07 PM Reply
And what? Bow'ls is a better reply?
[10] Stephen Robins › Blindpoetry 14-May-04/12:14 AM Reply
Shut up dicksplash.
[n/a] Blindpoetry › Stephen Robins 14-May-04/9:30 AM Reply
Do you people have a strange fetish for those kind of insults?
It's always dick'something'...

I dub your reply, Fat Back, a stupid one that is filled with much ignorance...

*nods*
[10] Stephen Robins › Blindpoetry 14-May-04/9:47 AM Reply
What are you on about dicknose?

[10] sliver 13-May-04/8:31 PM Reply
Apocalyptic, or somthing. I like this one.