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Let the Healing Begin (Free verse) by http://bandgeek
I finally felt it: that hint of disgust, not so promising as repulsion following intoxicated one night stands. But all the same, I wanted, just then, to be free, turn my head from unrestrained pheromone, refuse to draw the musk deep within, the former oxygen of my smoke studded atmosphere. Drag a sheet between this leg and that sweat stuck leg, spit that salt off my tongue, brush my teeth, wash those sheets, cook the notorious, delicious foods and roll over. After eight years: an irresolute no thank you.

Up the ladder: Beachy head
Down the ladder: As The Days Turn to Months

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.25
Weighted score: 5.1490035
Overall Rank: 5336
Posted: July 15, 2005 7:50 PM PDT; Last modified: July 15, 2005 7:50 PM PDT
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Comments:
[8] Dovina @ 66.235.60.64 | 16-Jul-05/7:08 AM | Reply
Talk about a rut! And pretty well told.
[8] darby pyn @ 207.200.116.130 | 16-Jul-05/10:29 AM | Reply
well done.
very profound and vivid.
[n/a] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 20-Jul-05/7:58 AM | Reply
well told.
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