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The Angel and The Ass (Prose Poem) by pain killer If you are an angel
Then I am the ass
And the ass saw the angel
From behind the glass
But the glass it was frosted
And the ass he caught cold
And all that he longed
Was for an angel to hold
But the angel had wings
And the ass he had none
He sneezed and looked back
And the angel had gone
The angel took flight
And she flew far away
The ass blew his nose
And lay down in the hay
He dreamed of the angel
And all of her kind
He awoke in the morning
And wings he did find
But those wings did not fit
And so alas
That is the tale
Of the angel and the ass
Up the ladder:
Limp Cock
Down the ladder:
Farmhouse, Southern France (storm on arrival)
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
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Posted: June 2, 2004 12:48 PM PDT; Last modified: June 2, 2004 12:48 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.888889 Overall Rank: 1497 The following users have marked this poem on their favorites list:
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pain killer @ 217.159.74.253
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2-Jun-04/12:50 PM
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I got the idea of the title from the Nick Cave novel...I decided to write a bitter sweet tale of unrequited love disguised as a childrens poem...i dunno if it works or not...you tell me
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god'swife @ 209.178.142.212
> pain killer
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2-Jun-04/1:04 PM
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It doesn't work because nothing interesting happens. Your other poems are interesting.
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horus8 @ 24.130.62.63
> god'swife
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2-Jun-04/1:27 PM
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Yeah, about as interesting as my mother farting.
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horus8 @ 24.130.62.63
> pain killer
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2-Jun-04/1:29 PM
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This is a lyric, and bangless at that.
And how is this a prose poem? This is a soggy cracker jack in denial mang.
horus...your put downs are witless shit. i hope your poetry is better.
Maybe it's because he doesn't give a rat's ass about insulting you properly.
I bet you a million dollars you won't read his poetry.
yeh read afew got bored...horus8 psuedo pretentious king/queen of the poemranker poetry board...oh but we are all not worthy...whatever...if it all gives some meaning to his worthless existence then what the hell...horus8..self elected intimidator of those he considers his inferior...okay zodiac...you can kiss his ass again now
Shi', cracker, I don' give a fuck about horus.
And he's not a "self-elected intimidator", we all elected him. We also voted him prettiest poemranker user and best original song about cripples. It was a big to-do a while back.
Good, I don't suppose the angel felt the attraction eh?
Maybe if she'd needed to pack in to the mountains, you know - he could carry her celestial food. 203 view(s)
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