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Desire (Free verse) by mk32
She sits across from me,
As we talk that rainy day away.
The umbrella over the table
Conceals us in its shade and
Hides us from the cascading rain.
Her hair like yellow windchimes
In the breeze that sweeps on by,
Her blue eyes penetrate me,
And I'm sure mine do the same to her.
I wanted so much to tell how I felt,
But not so much that I wanted to risk
What we did have over what could be,
And now I awaken and see through the window
The rain in torrents, and the lightning
That cracks the dark sky with a crash.
I close the window and return to my slumber
And hope that I dream that dream again.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.4
Weighted score: 5.166884
Overall Rank: 5028
Posted: May 5, 2004 3:01 PM PDT; Last modified: May 5, 2004 3:01 PM PDT
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