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Fool (Free verse) by arduinn I donât know who to trust
Who to believe
Drowned in these lies
Pulled under by deceit
The past has caught up with me
No chance of breaking free.
Up the ladder:
storm
Down the ladder:
Xmas gifts list
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Posted: June 8, 2004 6:41 AM PDT; Last modified: June 8, 2004 6:41 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.7156477 Overall Rank: 1921 Comments:
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titan69 @ 62.31.23.56
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8-Jun-04/1:50 PM
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Go know! before its to late!!
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zodiac @ 65.161.41.48
> titan69
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8-Jun-04/9:14 PM
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SCIENTIST IN SOME SECRET MONITORING FACILITY [to himself, munching apple]: Hmm, that's odd... The failure rate in Yorkshire just shot up 10 Langerhans! Must be a glitch in the sensor array...
Trust in God
and? come on now. you can do better than that.
Wow. This one is getting lots of traffic, isn't it? Never a bad thing.
I'd like to see this expanded; fleshed out a bit - and it will be better for it.
i'll do that.. but give me some time ya.. thanx
this could be a really intense poem if you did expand on it...( gosh I hate giving advice)....lots of emotions left unsaid here I think....
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