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Fool (Free verse) by arduinn

I don’t know who to trust Who to believe Drowned in these lies Pulled under by deceit The past has caught up with me No chance of breaking free.

Shuushin 11-Jun-04/8:26 PM
Wow. This one is getting lots of traffic, isn't it? Never a bad thing.

I'd like to see this expanded; fleshed out a bit - and it will be better for it.




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