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Fool (Free verse) by arduinn

I don’t know who to trust Who to believe Drowned in these lies Pulled under by deceit The past has caught up with me No chance of breaking free.

redneck_woman3322 5-Oct-04/5:14 PM
this could be a really intense poem if you did expand on it...( gosh I hate giving advice)....lots of emotions left unsaid here I think....




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