poemranker ::Linger on by sliver

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Linger on

by sliver

Member since 2002 · Posted 29 May 2004 · Edited 8 Jun 2004 · 5 comments

Scattered, tattered, and torn. Poetry in the bottom drawer. paper properly worn. Dusty forgotten memories, Waiting to be found, And once again set free. The inkstains on my fingers Are almost completely gone. But old feelings linger on.

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5 comments

[7] tadpole 30-May-04/7:47 PM Reply
like how you were flowing just the last line kinda stops it from workin real well
[n/a] Sunshine Conkey 8-Jun-04/6:02 PM Reply
yeah, ya lost it on the last line. Ya started out
good though.
[n/a] sliver 8-Jun-04/6:18 PM Reply
How 'bout now?
[7] INTRANSIT › sliver 8-Jun-04/7:10 PM Reply
You're doing well. Keep going.
[10] deleted user 13-Oct-05/5:27 PM Reply
Excellent poem.........as always, as you like to hear.
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