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mutiny (Free verse) by Bill Z Bub I'm off to sea
now that the singular days of summer
the hard light days
the blinding white rays
are here.
barefoot
inevitable
slipping
the stowaways barely move
under the weight of invisible galactic terror
polly is calling
captain future come in captain
future
can't you read me?
entwined in ripe planks,
a crow's nest
above
the black freighter
my lifeboat
constructed from
cadavers of
faulty reasoning.
guilty / not guilty
your honour.
you saw but the vaulting crater'd backs
of secret sea beasts.
looks like its to be the pirate's life
for me
not guilty by (voided)
reason
of in-
san-
ity.
Up the ladder:
One More Try
Down the ladder:
2012 - The Haiku Remix.
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Posted: June 7, 2004 11:42 PM PDT; Last modified: January 3, 2005 2:40 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: 8059 Comments:
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Bill Z Bub @ 216.75.181.83
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7-Jun-04/11:44 PM
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Lock up your silverware, I'm back.
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SupremeDreamer @ 66.42.2.64
> Bill Z Bub
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10-Jun-04/8:45 PM
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I was wondering if I perhaps should have hunted you down to disturb your hibernation. Welcome back, and take this blessing of nine- I liked the poem, but the line breaks made it a bit confusing, though I suspect that was your intention, somewhat.
I like it, therapy or not. good to see you again.
Not sure about being entwined in planks. I flat out don't understand the therapy line. Don't change it yet. Imma thinkin'. Prelim 8
I tink I can see it.
welcome back, bub.
how you doin,<~>?
What's up pimp.
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