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Basic (Free verse) by Chasz Misleading I wonder sometimes about you
what does go on inside
we are connected
by the most basic of things
yet why
why can't i see
why can't i see you looking at me
you are there i know
yet there is more
did I move u
did I
did I see you
did i see all of you
deep inside i know the answer
and although it is impossible
to go beyond what i am
I ache
Up the ladder:
Johnny
Down the ladder:
Fair Dianne
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Posted: June 7, 2004 10:15 PM PDT; Last modified: June 7, 2004 10:15 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.134471 Overall Rank: 5583 Comments:
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sliver @ 63.190.80.238
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8-Jun-04/4:04 PM
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I doubt it, We can never see who someone is entirely.
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