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For the love of joey(revised) (Other) by mystic enoch I find so hard
these words I must say
For the love of you
I write them today.
For the love of you
I will give you my soul
It burn me like a flame
my wild heart
that you have tamed.
For the love of you
this pain I endure
my love for you
I know I am sure.
I never felt like this
for anyone before.
In my heart a feeling
I cant ignore.
In all gods creation
now I find
a love like yours
it is truly divine.
Please understand
that in my heart
I will make room for you
and this is where it starts.
I promised myself long ago,
If I find a love like this
I will give him my soul.
For the love of you
I will try to stay
I hope your heart is true
this I pray.
With all my heart
this I will do
only for the love of you.
Up the ladder:
A friend told me
Down the ladder:
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Posted: May 3, 2005 2:29 PM PDT; Last modified: May 8, 2005 2:05 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.134471 Overall Rank: 5596 Comments:
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mendoju @ 4.186.114.13
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9-May-05/4:00 PM
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Oh My God, this was beautiful - you're quite the writer Enoch2. Mendoju (Joey's sister)
Thanks, this is spiritually moving!
"for the love of you" is just bad.
the genitive form of YOU is YOUR. "for your love" is a song by a reggae band (King Konga) a Country Artist (Chris LeDoux), and a classic sixties rock song (yardbirds). I even think Stevie Wonder sang a song titled For your Love. okay. bye. 201 view(s)
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