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For the love of joey(revised) (Other) by mystic enoch

I find so hard these words I must say For the love of you I write them today. For the love of you I will give you my soul It burn me like a flame my wild heart that you have tamed. For the love of you this pain I endure my love for you I know I am sure. I never felt like this for anyone before. In my heart a feeling I cant ignore. In all gods creation now I find a love like yours it is truly divine. Please understand that in my heart I will make room for you and this is where it starts. I promised myself long ago, If I find a love like this I will give him my soul. For the love of you I will try to stay I hope your heart is true this I pray. With all my heart this I will do only for the love of you.

Bankrupt_Word_Clerk 17-Jun-05/12:23 PM
"for the love of you" is just bad.

the genitive form of YOU is YOUR.

"for your love" is a song by a reggae band (King Konga) a Country Artist (Chris LeDoux), and a classic sixties rock song (yardbirds). I even think Stevie Wonder sang a song titled For your Love.

okay. bye.




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