| Re: Goin' For Broke by MacFrantic |
21-Jun-04/8:13 PM |
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Busted. Reminds me of a time not too many years ago. I was probably looking for something else tho'.
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| Re: Quiet, Kind Hills by Dovina |
21-Jun-04/8:27 PM |
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It would seem that you have a solid foundation. Enjoy .
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| Re: unbroken bottle by skaskowski |
21-Jun-04/8:30 PM |
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So much to imbibe, I fear I must read this one several times. great work.
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| Re: Exquisite butterflies by donmiguel1960 |
21-Jun-04/8:48 PM |
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A painful way to live. You really need to quit now, I can't add everything you write to my favorites. on second thought, keep writing. Do you mind if I print a few of yours out?
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| Re: I never really knew by donmiguel1960 |
21-Jun-04/8:54 PM |
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Giving is everything. Read 'I Will Stay' by NoSage. that is my opinion. And yes, it is the truest form of happiness, charity. I have never felt better than when I can be of service to someone in need, and I thank God for giving me the skills necessary to help many people.
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| Re: Broken Wings by donmiguel1960 |
21-Jun-04/9:05 PM |
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For some reason I kept picturing the Holy Spirit. You say you have never written before? what a way to start!
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| Re: your best friend by New Life Drug |
27-Jun-04/10:44 PM |
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| Re: Y Tylluanod by Blurgerocity |
27-Jun-04/10:48 PM |
Umm, that's not latin, none of it. Confiteor natura et terra. But the english parts sounded good to my intoxicated mind.
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| Re: Tough by Dovina |
27-Jun-04/10:51 PM |
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Guess you grew up on him.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
27-Jun-04/10:55 PM |
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I would try to take a walk. You write of nothing but love and infatuation, try to expand your horizons, there is so much more to life. And poetry.
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27-Jun-04/10:56 PM |
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| Re: Desert Rain by donmiguel1960 |
27-Jun-04/11:03 PM |
Ahhh metaphore. A region I have not achieved.
l.19, scent?
Stanza 6, I think agai is abused,Just delete the second one, it isn't needed.
Hearts are sad, yearning for the healing to return.
By the way, thanks for the votes and comments my friend.
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| Re: The Sky and the Pond by somemorepoetry |
10-Aug-04/10:23 PM |
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I can only be happy that I decided to come back here tonight. I live in southeast Colorado, And I've seen three tornadoes from my front porc tonight, not to mention the two trees that I saw on fire tonight. I had to wait at one and call the fdp[ because it was just a flamin! Thanks .
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10-Aug-04/10:36 PM |
HEY< I hate this too FORK YOU VERY MUCH! you're a sick f__k grow up eh?
Way the by (YER TITLES SUCK TOO!)
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| Re: Countdown by TearsOnRoses |
10-Aug-04/10:42 PM |
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Listen....... Do you hear it? Never count your days. just learn to enjoy them. thanks for you vote on my poem old friends. read some more and tell me what you think. my e-mail is posted. thanks again.
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| Re: Certain circles by INTRANSIT |
10-Aug-04/10:47 PM |
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I grow with these people, as I do with you. DON'T NEGLECT ME!I can always use your help. Please.
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10-Aug-04/10:52 PM |
SEXY, as ever babe! Love ya, sorry I've been gone so long. don't be afraid to call 'n' say hey! By the way , e-mail me yer phone #, my phone took a chit
and it took your number w/ it.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
16-Aug-04/9:17 PM |
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Relocation? a well thought piece. enjoy those nocturnal ramblings my friend.
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16-Aug-04/9:20 PM |
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Life, yet again, in the fold. yes?
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
16-Aug-04/9:24 PM |
And no man has the power.
Get it right squeek.
Mayby I should include a prayer eh?
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