| Re: missing time by Bill Z Bub |
9-Dec-02/1:27 PM |
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Personally, I dig the mix of free verse splashed with rhyme. An enjoyable twist. The waking could be an artist, loved it.
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| Re: How the Mighty Fall by jdsnyd |
9-Dec-02/1:21 PM |
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No arguements here. Keep the left door shut.
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| Re: triple suicide server line by Bill Z Bub |
9-Dec-02/1:18 PM |
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I've been through two suicides in my life now.(not me)I'm hardening to them quickly. They're sad and selfish. nothing more. funny write.
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| Re: Walter Cronkite by UnityMitford |
9-Dec-02/1:14 PM |
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Maybe a month of his paycheck? I like anything that stabs.
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| Re: a comment on Panning for gold by INTRANSIT |
9-Dec-02/12:54 PM |
those putzes in Denver ARE dildos. Oh wait, that's a compliment.
disregard.
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| Re: a comment on Panning for gold by INTRANSIT |
9-Dec-02/12:52 PM |
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in the case of my dispatchers: rotten teeth!
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| Re: Missing the In-Between by <~> |
9-Dec-02/10:27 AM |
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Somehow I can't imagine you ever being lonely.
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| Re: a comment on And uncle sam says... by INTRANSIT |
9-Dec-02/10:24 AM |
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Thanks for voting y'all. The space bar really wasn't working on that terminal.
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| Re: nothing, as today by <~> |
4-Dec-02/4:41 AM |
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I'd say you were rightfully movedd.
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| Re: Poem For Times Such As These by Nicholas Jones |
4-Dec-02/4:37 AM |
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ok then, how about this: thanks foor fucking up my only form of escapism! or, hows about we all ship over to iraq and put ourselves in the line of fire for a "good cause" instead of writing poetry that accomplishes NOTHING!!
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| Re: want of warmth by <~> |
4-Dec-02/4:30 AM |
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another one of your fab 2 way haiku
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| Re: Silence by Cha no Onna |
3-Dec-02/4:13 PM |
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Z is big help. always. welcome,and nice entry work too.
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| Re: she said by Bill Z Bub |
3-Dec-02/3:52 PM |
Yes, the title gives too much away.
Love the beat! good job devil man.
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| Re: There is no Happy Hour in Bakersfield, Ca. by horus8 |
2-Dec-02/4:13 PM |
pouring it on,are we? Fine job too!
do it again!
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| Re: No One Cares by Quarton |
29-Nov-02/4:58 PM |
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| Re: a comment on ode to zzinnia by daniella |
29-Nov-02/4:48 PM |
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| Re: ode to zzinnia by daniella |
29-Nov-02/4:47 PM |
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She is a spicy meat-aball!
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| Re: Once upon a Christmas Eve by exoticwriter |
29-Nov-02/4:35 PM |
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every day I pray for this.
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| Re: Shut the fuck up and fix me a Scoobie snack. by Bachus |
27-Nov-02/6:49 PM |
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| Re: a comment on The Nagian, or, Red Be Unread by <~> |
27-Nov-02/6:27 PM |
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