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The Nagian, or, Red Be Unread

by <~>

Member since 2002 · Posted 27 Nov 2002 · Edited 27 Nov 2002 · 24 comments

hold a razor to my neck red already as i play it satire, tired, i display it xenophobic, think i'm clever using words as a lever tripping over punctuation; can't quite get the proper spacing never bother check spelling (don't you mind that little swelling) infect, enflame, engage, and rattle comes off the page like so much prattle but the Nagian says, "you should his, thats probably why" and who among us can deny the struth of his oracular promise? hells, not me, i'm just a dumbass

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24 comments

[n/a] ==Doylum 27-Nov-02/8:10 AM Reply
oww!
[n/a] ==Doylum 27-Nov-02/8:12 AM Reply
whats the shape?
[n/a] <~> › ==Doylum 27-Nov-02/8:17 AM Reply
it's almost a triangle, but it's not. i can't even do that right.
then again, it could be a really tiny, semi-erect, uncircumcised...triangle.
[n/a] ==Doylum › <~> 27-Nov-02/8:19 AM Reply
why?
[n/a] <~> › ==Doylum 27-Nov-02/8:19 AM Reply
see razor v. redneck on 'friend'
[n/a] horus8 › ==Doylum 27-Nov-02/9:15 PM Reply
it's your penguin spirit guide...pointing you to the promise land..
[n/a] ==Doylum › horus8 28-Nov-02/4:11 AM Reply
looks like a bascinet to me, wheres his mighty weapon
[n/a] ==Doylum 27-Nov-02/8:27 AM Reply
so did i steal whoreass bong?
[n/a] <~> › ==Doylum 27-Nov-02/8:30 AM Reply
i dunno. did you?
[n/a] ==Doylum › <~> 27-Nov-02/8:32 AM Reply
dunno maybe not. oh well ne'r mind
[n/a] ecargo 27-Nov-02/8:51 AM Reply
What's a Nagian?
[8] vulcan 27-Nov-02/11:23 AM Reply
one can't help exclaiming " WOW!!"8
[9] INTRANSIT 27-Nov-02/2:43 PM Reply
Works for me. Even if it is misshapen.
[n/a] ==Doylum › INTRANSIT 27-Nov-02/2:45 PM Reply
can you tell me which angle i'm supposed to look from? pleeeeeease
[n/a] ==Doylum › ==Doylum 27-Nov-02/3:00 PM Reply
well man? what should i do? by god yer reticence mocks me
[9] <{Baba^Yaga}> 27-Nov-02/5:41 PM Reply
"hells, not me," was the pinnacle of this cap, is it, yes i believe that was a cap on someone..hmmmmmmm. your not a dumbass. you're a compass, and jeff bridges from starman all at the same time.o
[9] INTRANSIT › <{Baba^Yaga}> 27-Nov-02/6:27 PM Reply
Copy that I did!
[1] deleted user 29-Nov-02/3:16 AM Reply
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[n/a] <~> › deleted user 29-Nov-02/8:06 AM Reply
dammit! exposed!
you mean that wasn't your cock up my ass? damn. it was so ticklish feeling i thought it must have been yours.
as for the rest of your comments, yeah, so what? sometimes i suck cum and sometimes i gargle with it, and sometimes i use it as a pomade as it imparts incredible shine to the hair--both north and south varieties. what's better than shiny pubes? oh, that's right, a dick dipped in crack! how stupid of me!
nice visiting with you, but i gotta go now. there's a line a mile long outside and a girl's gotta pay the rent.
luv, z
[n/a] UnityMitford › deleted user 2-Dec-02/6:57 AM Reply
hmm. you might be the biggest idiot yet to befoul these pages. i'll bet a million dollars you were drunk when you wrote this rant, but i'll also bet you were just as stupid when you woke up the next morning. try to reserve this kind of talk for your mom (talk about one-eyed, sperm-burping gutter sluts!). i know she enjoys it.
[n/a] UnityMitford › UnityMitford 9-Dec-02/11:32 AM Reply
shit! it looks like i directed this at you, zzin, when it was really a response to some asshole whose comment has been deleted. just so you know.
[n/a] horus8 29-Nov-02/3:27 AM Reply
don't be stupid man..she knows your not me...and she knows i would never 'intentionally' say that to her...unfortunately mr.fatzeeblesleper was it?...you can go dynamite your own asshole.."in the name of love. what more? in the name of love". dickshiner.0
[n/a] razorgrin 29-Nov-02/7:02 AM Reply
if anyone needs a really good argument for the active wiping out of humanity, see the fine example of fatz_whogivesafuck. I'm personally amazed that this entity has the capacity to use a mouse. If we ver needed an excuse for a neutron bomb..
[n/a] horus8 1-Jan-03/6:56 PM Reply
did you sell me out the other day to that newbie?t