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The Nagian, or, Red Be Unread (Free verse) by <~> hold
a razor
to my neck
red already
as i play it
satire, tired,
i display it
xenophobic,
think i'm clever
using words as a lever
tripping over punctuation;
can't quite get the proper spacing
never bother check spelling
(don't you mind that little swelling)
infect, enflame, engage, and rattle
comes off the page like so much prattle
but the Nagian says, "you should his,
thats probably why" and who among
us can deny the struth of his
oracular promise?
hells, not me,
i'm just a
dumbass
Up the ladder:
Not in front of the kids.
Down the ladder:
Welsh Landscape Part One
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Posted: November 27, 2002 7:59 AM PST; Last modified: November 27, 2002 8:33 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.6723537 Overall Rank: 2012 Comments:
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==Doylum @ 62.6.64.170
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27-Nov-02/8:10 AM
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oww!
whats the shape?
it's almost a triangle, but it's not. i can't even do that right.
then again, it could be a really tiny, semi-erect, uncircumcised...triangle.
why?
see razor v. redneck on 'friend'
it's your penguin spirit guide...pointing you to the promise land..
looks like a bascinet to me, wheres his mighty weapon
so did i steal whoreass bong?
i dunno. did you?
dunno maybe not. oh well ne'r mind
What's a Nagian?
one can't help exclaiming " WOW!!"8
Works for me. Even if it is misshapen.
can you tell me which angle i'm supposed to look from? pleeeeeease
well man? what should i do? by god yer reticence mocks me
"hells, not me," was the pinnacle of this cap, is it, yes i believe that was a cap on someone..hmmmmmmm. your not a dumbass. you're a compass, and jeff bridges from starman all at the same time.o
Copy that I did!
Hey zzinnia66, this is FaTz_vls. I came 2 your page 2 answer your question through one of your shity little fuckin gay ass lesbian poemz. Yea, i'll tell you what you're fuckin missing you fat one eyed whore. You're missing my fuckin COCK UP YOUR ASS BITCH. You don't like somethin.....great,.....FUCK OFF. Try 2 hide your TRUE sluty, cumsucking, devil bitch side from the rest of the world. Not every1 is a herpies infected, crack loving dick slut like you. I pray you die and fucking rot in hell 4 ever.-Truly yours-Some1 who thinks you guzzle cum.
dammit! exposed!
you mean that wasn't your cock up my ass? damn. it was so ticklish feeling i thought it must have been yours. as for the rest of your comments, yeah, so what? sometimes i suck cum and sometimes i gargle with it, and sometimes i use it as a pomade as it imparts incredible shine to the hair--both north and south varieties. what's better than shiny pubes? oh, that's right, a dick dipped in crack! how stupid of me! nice visiting with you, but i gotta go now. there's a line a mile long outside and a girl's gotta pay the rent. luv, z
hmm. you might be the biggest idiot yet to befoul these pages. i'll bet a million dollars you were drunk when you wrote this rant, but i'll also bet you were just as stupid when you woke up the next morning. try to reserve this kind of talk for your mom (talk about one-eyed, sperm-burping gutter sluts!). i know she enjoys it.
shit! it looks like i directed this at you, zzin, when it was really a response to some asshole whose comment has been deleted. just so you know.
don't be stupid man..she knows your not me...and she knows i would never 'intentionally' say that to her...unfortunately mr.fatzeeblesleper was it?...you can go dynamite your own asshole.."in the name of love. what more? in the name of love". dickshiner.0
if anyone needs a really good argument for the active wiping out of humanity, see the fine example of fatz_whogivesafuck. I'm personally amazed that this entity has the capacity to use a mouse. If we ver needed an excuse for a neutron bomb..
did you sell me out the other day to that newbie?t
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