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The Nagian, or, Red Be Unread (Free verse) by <~>

hold a razor to my neck red already as i play it satire, tired, i display it xenophobic, think i'm clever using words as a lever tripping over punctuation; can't quite get the proper spacing never bother check spelling (don't you mind that little swelling) infect, enflame, engage, and rattle comes off the page like so much prattle but the Nagian says, "you should his, thats probably why" and who among us can deny the struth of his oracular promise? hells, not me, i'm just a dumbass

<~> 29-Nov-02/8:06 AM
dammit! exposed!
you mean that wasn't your cock up my ass? damn. it was so ticklish feeling i thought it must have been yours.
as for the rest of your comments, yeah, so what? sometimes i suck cum and sometimes i gargle with it, and sometimes i use it as a pomade as it imparts incredible shine to the hair--both north and south varieties. what's better than shiny pubes? oh, that's right, a dick dipped in crack! how stupid of me!
nice visiting with you, but i gotta go now. there's a line a mile long outside and a girl's gotta pay the rent.
luv, z




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