| Re: The Nagian, or, Red Be Unread by <~> |
27-Nov-02/2:43 PM |
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Works for me. Even if it is misshapen.
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| Re: Some place west of here, or the big blah blah. both apply by horus8 |
27-Nov-02/2:32 PM |
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....just kickin' here,aint no boot lickin' here...
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| Re: two poles are better than one by <~> |
27-Nov-02/2:22 PM |
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Megadeths' "sweating bullets" comes to mind.
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| Re: Exhaustion by vulcan |
27-Nov-02/2:04 PM |
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Get your eyes checked. That won't happen as often.
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| Re: a comment on Frozen beauty by INTRANSIT |
27-Nov-02/1:56 PM |
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I see what you mean. They're guarding the sky,though. That makes them over,yes?
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| Re: a comment on Check Yourself by INTRANSIT |
27-Nov-02/12:51 PM |
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Got it. thanks for expanding my vocab. What is my homework assignment? Be specific:#
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| Re: a comment on Frozen beauty by INTRANSIT |
27-Nov-02/12:44 PM |
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I guess haiku don't need titles do they? So what didn't I do right here?
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| Re: a comment on Check Yourself by INTRANSIT |
27-Nov-02/8:07 AM |
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As is my wha? S-4 is off rythm I think. thinking.......
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| Re: a comment on Check Yourself by INTRANSIT |
27-Nov-02/7:49 AM |
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The judge went first to give it kilter. New stanza added. better?
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| Re: a comment on Check Yourself by INTRANSIT |
26-Nov-02/8:13 PM |
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damn. I'll work it tomorrow. Thanks z.
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| Re: a comment on Charlie by INTRANSIT |
26-Nov-02/8:11 PM |
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I'll re-post one of my other haikus tomorrow which is better. I just did this 'cause I really love this goldfish my wife bought me weeks ago.
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| Re: a comment on Charlie by INTRANSIT |
26-Nov-02/7:33 PM |
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Well duh. I could've done that considering the title is a proper name. Um, swing what? I'm hung like a stud hamster!
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| Re: a comment on Charlie by INTRANSIT |
26-Nov-02/7:30 PM |
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A god's wife? She pulled her stuff around the same time I did. That was wierd. I prefer to stay as close to the proper form and topic as I can. I'm all for anything poignant or humorous though.
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| Re: ode to horus by daniella |
26-Nov-02/7:25 PM |
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Both of these made me laugh. Thanks.
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| Re: a comment on Check Yourself by INTRANSIT |
26-Nov-02/7:21 PM |
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nice catch, thanks. Does the rest of the beat work?
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| Re: a comment on Charlie by INTRANSIT |
26-Nov-02/7:18 PM |
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I will, eventually. Thank you, and you're not a big fan of the haiku are you?
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| Re: a comment on Charlie by INTRANSIT |
26-Nov-02/7:02 PM |
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Insecurity, mostly. Trying to balance work,poetry and time with my wife is frustrating. I'd rather verse and learn more than anything right now. Would you comment on my haiku, please.
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| Re: a comment on Charlie by INTRANSIT |
26-Nov-02/7:00 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Night-mare by INTRANSIT |
20-Nov-02/9:03 PM |
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I agree, fuckit. I'm too tired to care right now anyway. gotta move some fuckin fords.
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| Re: a comment on Night-mare by INTRANSIT |
20-Nov-02/8:50 PM |
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The contradiction is a fragrance and woman#1 expecting her beau to be faithful while she wasn't. Romance: Fragrance and woman#2 This hs nothing to do with target stores. Obviously that must go.
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