Frozen beauty

Member since 2002 · Posted 27 Nov 2002 · 8 comments

Icicles looming Crystalline guards hang watchful over greying skies

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[6] UnityMitford 27-Nov-02/8:45 AM Reply

i want more from the last line. how about "while hitler sniffles," or "inside your stinkhole" or "like the Gestapo"?

[6] poetandknowit 27-Nov-02/9:09 AM Reply

Much better, but ditch the title.

[n/a] INTRANSIT › poetandknowit 27-Nov-02/12:44 PM Reply

I guess haiku don't need titles do they? So what didn't I do right here?

[9] vulcan 27-Nov-02/11:29 AM Reply

edited?it was nice.I revoted.9

[7] <{Baba^Yaga}> 27-Nov-02/1:48 PM Reply

under greying skys. 7.

[n/a] INTRANSIT › <{Baba^Yaga}> 27-Nov-02/1:56 PM Reply

I see what you mean. They're guarding the sky,though. That makes them over,yes?

[9] Tigger8023 27-Nov-02/7:30 PM Reply

really good

[9] Jill Stockinger 1-Jan-21/12:25 PM Reply

I don't know that "looming" fits; loved all the rest of it.