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Frozen beauty (Haiku) by INTRANSIT

Icicles looming Crystalline guards hang watchful over greying skies

UnityMitford 27-Nov-02/8:45 AM
i want more from the last line. how about "while hitler sniffles," or "inside your stinkhole" or "like the Gestapo"?




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