Re: A Pirate's Sonnet by snacktime	11-Dec-02/5:46 PM
Looks good to me.
Re: a comment on Haiku by INTRANSIT	11-Dec-02/5:36 PM
ok, I can accept that. stiiiilll, am i even in the ballpark?
Re: a comment on Goes the Spoils by <~>	11-Dec-02/5:34 PM
the long way of saying (good visuals)
Re: Goes the Spoils by <~>	11-Dec-02/5:28 PM
either you've done something here or I have an easy minds eye.
Re: a comment on Haiku by INTRANSIT	11-Dec-02/5:20 PM
that's what I was kind of thinking, too much stuff. Am I anywhere near a true haiku? I need to check because no sense in trying an I/P if I haven't gotten a simple haiku right. right?
Re: a comment on Haiku by INTRANSIT	11-Dec-02/5:17 PM
absofrigginlutely! Whydya leave? Glad you're back. You are back, aren't you?
Re: a comment on Haiku by INTRANSIT	11-Dec-02/7:29 AM
I was thinking about if fish tell time the way humans can by starlight or sunlight.
Re: a comment on Check Yourself by INTRANSIT	11-Dec-02/6:51 AM
punc change too. better?
Re: a comment on Check Yourself by INTRANSIT	11-Dec-02/6:49 AM
Why thank you sir! Usable info finally. I shall adjust at once.
Re: a comment on The yellow rose of California by INTRANSIT	10-Dec-02/5:36 PM
Does that mean you and P&K are one in the same? I'm really lost , I guess.
Re: a comment on The yellow rose of California by INTRANSIT	10-Dec-02/5:34 PM
well, uh, gee, um, well, no, because, damn.
Re: a comment on The yellow rose of California by INTRANSIT	10-Dec-02/5:23 PM
thank you. everyone has to start somewhere. quitting would be the worst you could do. I would know. I did it twice.
Re: a comment on Panning for gold by INTRANSIT	10-Dec-02/1:23 PM
Uh, thanks I guess. Somehow doesn't seem earned though.
Re: a comment on Bilboards, and music, just shouldn't be mixed. by Bachus	10-Dec-02/1:21 PM
Is that anything like developing a funny walk?
Re: a comment on The yellow rose of California by INTRANSIT	10-Dec-02/9:31 AM
Thank you.
Re: Xmas gifts list by lunar	10-Dec-02/9:28 AM
It seems our thoughts are similar somehow.
Re: a comment on Panning for gold by INTRANSIT	10-Dec-02/7:07 AM
Thank you Caducus, I added "dreamland" this morning. I wanted it in the original but my mind gets so flushed with ideas that I just forgot all about it.
Re: Bilboards, and music, just shouldn't be mixed. by Bachus	10-Dec-02/6:57 AM
What,may I ask, does it take to earn a Bachian swagger award?
Re: Jacaranda by David	9-Dec-02/5:47 PM
I read the rest of your stuff and liked it all. What is it about you damn californians that make you write so well? Drugs? Damn. should've done em when I had the chance.
Re: Jacaranda by David	9-Dec-02/2:56 PM
A tree perhaps? I shall post mine at once! Oh damn. I cant post till tues. That's it! Some one give me a secondary moniker please!