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Jacaranda (Free verse) by David I walk down the street of you
taking in your loveliness.
Little hands
The frilly way your fingers bend.
Fragrant ornamental limbs
You dance with the wind
Making a dumb statue of me.
Enchanted by your green green dress
Overwhelming everything
with your beautiful mess.
Up the ladder:
A BACHUS MAN A MANY
Down the ladder:
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Posted: December 9, 2002 1:36 PM PST; Last modified: December 10, 2002 8:46 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.089402 Overall Rank: 6244 Comments:
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9-Dec-02/2:25 PM
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smile. ah. yes.
mute statue?
dumb statue? I pretty dumb.
A tree perhaps? I shall post mine at once! Oh damn. I cant post till tues. That's it! Some one give me a secondary moniker please!
Try 'enchanted by your....' that way you really have been transformed. This isn't about a tree is it?
Enchanted? I like that thank you nice lady. No it's not about a tree.(sigh).
I read the rest of your stuff and liked it all. What is it about you damn californians that make you write so well? Drugs? Damn. should've done em when I had the chance.
Please tell me you are joking. Yes, yes, you are poking fun.
Drugs, uh, do antihistamines count? Maybe it's the aspirin. I don't like drugs, except of cpourse OTC's. Ihave always been subjected to random drug screenings so never got into them. Glad you like my rants, I use them as a stress-reliever, never took them seriously. I read a lot. My mind wanders. A friend told me I should try out this website, so here I am, and suprised how much good poetry is here. Thank you for the compliments.
cute. on st. patricks for lasses.t
also. nice title.i
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