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Jacaranda (Free verse) by David

I walk down the street of you taking in your loveliness. Little hands The frilly way your fingers bend. Fragrant ornamental limbs You dance with the wind Making a dumb statue of me. Enchanted by your green green dress Overwhelming everything with your beautiful mess.

god'swife 9-Dec-02/4:12 PM
Try 'enchanted by your....' that way you really have been transformed. This isn't about a tree is it?




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