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Jacaranda (Free verse) by David

I walk down the street of you taking in your loveliness. Little hands The frilly way your fingers bend. Fragrant ornamental limbs You dance with the wind Making a dumb statue of me. Enchanted by your green green dress Overwhelming everything with your beautiful mess.

INTRANSIT 9-Dec-02/5:47 PM
I read the rest of your stuff and liked it all. What is it about you damn californians that make you write so well? Drugs? Damn. should've done em when I had the chance.




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