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A BACHUS MAN A MANY

by Garrett S Sexton

Member since 2002 · Posted 8 Dec 2002 · 3 comments

why should it flow?Bachus drank his own piss,for years he'd thought himself a bastard,on the verge of an eternal bliss! Now finding out in his later years. A mortal man full of baby tears. I DON'T WANNA DIE I DON'T WANNA DIE I REALLY DON'T WANNA LEAVE,HAVING ALWAYS BEEN UNLOVED! Justso,justso,an ORPHAN. Now knowing what he knows,and feeling what he feels. He deals himself distructive cards,ALCOHOL,HEROIN,PILLS. HE HORE'S HIMSELF FOR MONEY,HIS CLOSEST THING TO LOVE A FIX! A FIX! A FIX! Now slumped in some shite as normality walks above. His dying last words.MAMMA!I NEED LOVE. BOO HOO,BUT NO-ONE CARES, THERE'S A PLENTY MORE LIKE YOU. EVERYWHERE!

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[n/a] Bachus 8-Dec-02/12:08 PM Reply
Quit looking in the mirror, yurn around. i'm behind you in the window. blade. then again i heard you had a good voice..perhap we'llcall you sade..yes sade it is...where's my precious we wants it we needs it GIVES ITS TO US!
[n/a] <~> › Bachus 8-Dec-02/12:16 PM Reply
oh Garrett S Sexton, you silly boy. learn to see, would you?
i told him i loved him, and he shared with me. never charged me a red cent. and oh the fun we had! and, truth is, i do love him. so do many others. he needs to spread his love around; he's a mortal one 'c' short of being a god. would that i could walk as he with my feet so scarred, and still preserve my core.
now go back to your enmity, and have a nice day!
[8] -=SeTTle=- 8-Dec-02/8:17 PM Reply
This is quite good.