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Untitled # 93 (Free verse) by nightii the addict
waits
in graceful
desperation,
watching
his rusting
reflection
in the
eyes
of passing
children.
Up the ladder:
Ego
Down the ladder:
A BACHUS MAN A MANY
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Posted: September 8, 2002 6:38 PM PDT; Last modified: September 8, 2002 6:38 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.089402 Overall Rank: 6240 Comments:
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.86.113.159
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8-Sep-02/7:53 PM
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The children mentioned have nothing to do with it, do they? You just said 'children' to make it more profou^H^H^H^H^H^H^H^H^H^H^H^H^Hsorry I'm not supposed to comment on your poemes.
"graceful desperation and rusting reflection"are very good!Bravo!7/0
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