poemranker ::Untitled # 93 by nightii

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Untitled # 93

by nightii

Member since 2002 · Posted 8 Sep 2002 · 2 comments

the addict waits in graceful desperation, watching his rusting reflection in the eyes of passing children.

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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 8-Sep-02/7:53 PM Reply
The children mentioned have nothing to do with it, do they? You just said 'children' to make it more profou^H^H^H^H^H^H^H^H^H^H^H^H^Hsorry I'm not supposed to comment on your poemes.
[8] vulcan 8-Sep-02/10:36 PM Reply
"graceful desperation and rusting reflection"are very good!Bravo!7/0