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How the Mighty Fall (Free verse) by jdsnyd
In our early years
before illumination
you were the self-appointed
minister of day to day essence.
A station you savored
and I gladly consented.
In my eyes your
word was truth,
stirring poetry
in all you touched.
Time,
a prowling harbinger of wisdom,
crept into your domain,
infecting your grandeur,
breeding questions and doubt.
Your ardent defense
was in the end flawed
and dauntingly human.
Jaded sorrow swelled
as your fallibility lay naked
in the gleam of reason.
Those who gazed,
you banished from your fading realm.
Left with a dwindling orb
of true believers.
These days,
I stand on the fringe
of your ashen ruins
grieving your fall,
and in a sense my own.
Your scripture is now read
like a tabloid and discarded,
thrown into obscure Delphian pools,
without a ripple.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7848
Posted: December 9, 2002 11:04 AM PST; Last modified: December 10, 2002 8:11 AM PST
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So olympian, I admire. Now I go back to the cthonic.