| Re: a comment on Decks of Cards (So Long to the City) by wilco |
5-Jun-04/8:11 PM |
You are not an original, and
Perfection is mostly persued by those who wish to do harm to others.
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| Re: a comment on Decks of Cards (So Long to the City) by wilco |
5-Jun-04/4:19 PM |
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| Re: The butchers consolation (Kyrielle) by SupremeDreamer |
5-Jun-04/2:51 PM |
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Gangs of New York, all gussied up. Listen and fix the hiccups.
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| Re: A Hick's Rendition of "Fire and Ice" by Enkidu |
5-Jun-04/2:41 PM |
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Of the two, this ones funnier. If they ever see a book, they should be on the same page or back to back.
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| Re: A short trip home by titan69 |
5-Jun-04/2:37 PM |
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Does the figure wear a tall hat? Is it cloaked in a cloak? Is it arm-ed with prawnes? Scary indeed.
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| Re: becoming by <~> |
5-Jun-04/1:17 PM |
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Too smart to be a pimple, why? I like the way this rolls but it sounds just abit rap-ish. Should I turn the potentiometer below 33 1/3?
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| Re: Solipsistic, Drunk, But Still Friends by horus8 |
5-Jun-04/11:38 AM |
You chose not to capitalize (howl). Interesting.
I think I need some Poundage myself.
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| Re: a comment on Dear Lord, by INTRANSIT |
2-Jun-04/5:39 PM |
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Thanks. My wife is posting for me. Somebody's getting their nipples tweaked when I get home. Maybe this poem.
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| Re: Oomphless by shwenatjadeflower |
16-May-04/6:31 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Truckers should not be poets by INTRANSIT |
16-May-04/6:29 PM |
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I posted it some time ago, and I've been sitting on it until I felt like tuning it a little. The middle lines didn't rhyme before and It makes more sense with the tweaks. It beats better now too. I'll twist 'er nips a little more some other time. Thanks for yours. It asks for the context of p/r? wha?
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| Re: Tripping Through A Paper Square by Shardik |
16-May-04/5:25 AM |
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more hyphens! smash the molds!!
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| Re: Weened by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
16-May-04/5:23 AM |
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Freaky when something doesn't get any comments. I think it's fine. Quite good actually.
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| Re: good bye. by nentwined |
16-May-04/5:21 AM |
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sum none. that's not pimple speak. This is really good.
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| Re: In the Land of Bob by Bobjim |
14-May-04/7:56 PM |
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Congratulations. You went for poetry, and got humor. I went for humor, and wound up glancing off an udder into the far reaches of the galaxy. Cows happen.
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| Re: a comment on Lips no longer innocent by tre |
14-May-04/7:46 PM |
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your generosity exceeds mine own.
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| Re: a comment on Bashing through the woods by INTRANSIT |
14-May-04/7:44 PM |
WAIT!! DON'T FALL FOR IT!! IT'S JUST A DIVERSIONARY TICTAC!!
AAAAARRRRGGGGHHHHH!!!
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| Re: Bashing through the woods by INTRANSIT |
14-May-04/10:53 AM |
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This is profiling. And profiling is wrong.
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| Re: Diane Keaton's Tits by JoyLuck |
14-May-04/6:16 AM |
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Wow. I guess there really isn't enough room for I have a fat back. I thought bins were bigger. hmmm.
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| Re: untitled: dedicated to my soldier/husband by SweetJuliet10 |
14-May-04/6:14 AM |
I'M GOING TO THROW YOU A LIFE PRESERVER!!! PUT IT ON!!!
Buy a copy of : Poetry for dummies. No, I'm not kidding. and some poetry to read. rummage through the section at the library for something you like. read. practice. Then rewrite this and do your Valiant husband the justice he deserves. Because, while heartfelt, this is not poetry. Most 'rankers will write 10 pieces, only one of which will be worth rewriting or posting. Get used to it. It's work.
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| Re: a comment on The Ballad of Fraser Allonby Q.C., Barrister-At-Law by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w |
14-May-04/5:59 AM |
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fair...equity... a bit of a reach but no more hiccup so, yes.
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