| Re: A life unsure by sliver |
8-Jun-04/5:55 AM |
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Yes you're doing well with this piece. Set it aside for a couple days, then read it aloud and listen and mark the spots that bug you. 8 keep going.
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| Re: mutiny by Bill Z Bub |
8-Jun-04/5:47 AM |
I like it, therapy or not. good to see you again.
Not sure about being entwined in planks.
I flat out don't understand the therapy line. Don't change it yet. Imma thinkin'. Prelim 8
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| Re: a comment on Bitter bacardi makes the black stones dance. by SupremeDreamer |
8-Jun-04/5:38 AM |
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Oh, it was yours. I'm sorry. I don't know what was wrong with your worm. As for the poem....
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| Re: a comment on Bitter bacardi makes the black stones dance. by SupremeDreamer |
8-Jun-04/5:36 AM |
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Not malaysian that I know of. Yes it is a 50/50 response. I liked the other better. Probably because I'm a laggarding traditionalist of sorts. meh on me, ha!
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| Re: a comment on Hollywierd by INTRANSIT |
7-Jun-04/8:23 PM |
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'sokay. I'm poetically challenged. Time heals all wounds, or some such hootenanny. I'll read 'em all tamale. My ocular locating lenses are parched.
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| Re: a comment on Hollywierd by INTRANSIT |
7-Jun-04/8:19 PM |
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Thank you. I'm suprised you like it.
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| Re: a comment on Hollywierd by INTRANSIT |
7-Jun-04/7:54 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Hollywierd by INTRANSIT |
7-Jun-04/7:53 PM |
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Point me to one of your rants. I'm curious. 'Course no one rants like the Big Bad Ho Daddy.
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| Re: Carl Jung And the Flying Spiders by horus8 |
7-Jun-04/7:45 PM |
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Your highway was plenty wide, pinballish though. Too bad Jung was working the construction zone and you failed to slow. Poor Carl. 9. For drowning me.
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| Re: Bitter bacardi makes the black stones dance. by SupremeDreamer |
7-Jun-04/7:34 PM |
If you wrote the other one about the tequila worm, then, meh, is my feeling. If not, meh anyway.
Maybe try one about Goldschlager instead.
Goldschlager- Noun. What Goldmember has in his pants.
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| Re: Writers' Block by wilco |
7-Jun-04/7:15 PM |
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| Re: Le Sommeil- Slumber by Sasha |
7-Jun-04/7:09 PM |
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I don't know french, but I'd say that since the french version end rhymes also, this took a few cups of espresso to complete.
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| Re: a comment on Decks of Cards (So Long to the City) by wilco |
7-Jun-04/6:24 AM |
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I see my comment was too short. I meant I didn't want him to cancel himself out by what someone else said about his lyrics. You have it handled, carry on.
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| Re: a comment on Decks of Cards (So Long to the City) by wilco |
6-Jun-04/7:54 PM |
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Don't do that to yourself.
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| Re: a comment on A life unsure by sliver |
6-Jun-04/7:26 PM |
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A copy of poetry for dummies. what's the Norton Anthology? i might need it.
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| Re: a comment on Solipsistic, Drunk, But Still Friends by horus8 |
6-Jun-04/6:17 PM |
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I am well aware that Horus8 is quite surgical about his choices.
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| Re: a comment on Decks of Cards (So Long to the City) by wilco |
6-Jun-04/2:12 PM |
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If this is the case, then why haven't the "perfect" people been able to rid the earth of those who are less than perfect.
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| Re: paperclips by son of the moon |
6-Jun-04/7:27 AM |
Lose the -little fuckers. and the parentheses marks.
I like it.
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| Re: and you by edwardo |
6-Jun-04/6:30 AM |
Sometimes,
a firecracker
resonates
like a bomb.
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| Re: why I hate politics by edwardo |
6-Jun-04/6:28 AM |
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Well Ed, I think you've got some of us piqued. I think this needs more. But that's me.
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