replying on Bugs by INTRANSIT
11 Jun 2004, 6:25 PM
Approving nod
Poetically, small improvements. Financially...(puts hands in pockets, looks at ground, kicks rocks) And I'm worried about our other Grande Dame. But, little I can do but pray. Glad to hear you're doing well!! Are you staying? Or is this a temporary visit?
on The Ocean Prefers A Sunset by wilco
10 Jun 2004, 5:47 AM
I want to like this. Especially with the caryatids. Great word ,btw. Just too piecemeal for me. Show me more about the support structures.
on The daisy-chain girl by richa
10 Jun 2004, 5:26 AM
I'm way off but, my mind went the filthy route first, but on a second read I thought it was about the practice of poetry. A daisy chain being ones older and of lesser quality poems. Damn. Sorry I missed the first cut too. 10 for your poem 6 for me being an idiot.
on A Flower for Monet by Shuushin
9 Jun 2004, 7:27 AM
I hate it when I miss really good stuff like this.
replying on mutiny by Bill Z Bub
8 Jun 2004, 7:04 PM
how you doin,<~>?
on Wedding Day by Caducus
8 Jun 2004, 6:50 PM
first read: swap -noticing and ignoring-
then- with wry misery (he's already exuding)
clambered? I think you mean -clammy?
doomed (seams)?
Um that's enough for now. I see serious problems but I also saw the whole picture, I do like it.
Particularly, arrogant wind and gray expressions sauntering. Work this one, it's worth it.
then- with wry misery (he's already exuding)
clambered? I think you mean -clammy?
doomed (seams)?
Um that's enough for now. I see serious problems but I also saw the whole picture, I do like it.
Particularly, arrogant wind and gray expressions sauntering. Work this one, it's worth it.
on The curse of language and other scattered thoughts by Y2kSlamPoet
8 Jun 2004, 6:38 PM
Are you mocking me?! Because I KNOW how to tie my shoes, mistuh man. 8 for the rant but, shouldn't this be on psyche-ranker or maybe Philo-ranker? I dunno.
on Isn't it a wonder by caitydee
8 Jun 2004, 5:59 AM
Well I'll be......