| Re: a comment on Bugs by INTRANSIT |
11-Jun-04/6:25 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Bugs by INTRANSIT |
11-Jun-04/6:24 PM |
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Thank you. And every one else here. All have contributed to my improvement in some way. No matter how samll.
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| Re: a comment on Bugs by INTRANSIT |
11-Jun-04/6:22 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Bugs by INTRANSIT |
11-Jun-04/6:21 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Bugs by INTRANSIT |
10-Jun-04/1:08 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Bugs by INTRANSIT |
10-Jun-04/1:08 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Bugs by INTRANSIT |
10-Jun-04/1:07 PM |
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Poetically, small improvements. Financially...(puts hands in pockets, looks at ground, kicks rocks) And I'm worried about our other Grande Dame. But, little I can do but pray. Glad to hear you're doing well!! Are you staying? Or is this a temporary visit?
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| Re: The Ocean Prefers A Sunset by wilco |
10-Jun-04/5:47 AM |
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I want to like this. Especially with the caryatids. Great word ,btw. Just too piecemeal for me. Show me more about the support structures.
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| Re: The daisy-chain girl by richa |
10-Jun-04/5:26 AM |
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I'm way off but, my mind went the filthy route first, but on a second read I thought it was about the practice of poetry. A daisy chain being ones older and of lesser quality poems. Damn. Sorry I missed the first cut too. 10 for your poem 6 for me being an idiot.
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| Re: a comment on Bugs by INTRANSIT |
10-Jun-04/5:19 AM |
I remember adding to this little by little and most of what I added (was) unnecessary. Damn fine line between art and ?????
Thank you for the compliment. How are you?
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| Re: a comment on Bugs by INTRANSIT |
9-Jun-04/4:30 PM |
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9-Jun-04/4:30 PM |
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Yeah, but we don't get shiney wings and neon colored entrails, not literally, at least.
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| Re: a comment on Bugs by INTRANSIT |
9-Jun-04/4:28 PM |
Sorry you're not happy with it, and I don't want to explain it away. It took me four days of look-adjust-forget, to get it,here.
You are correct about the transparency thing, and a doll for taking the time. Nice to see you again Mrs. G.
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| Re: A Flower for Monet by Shuushin |
9-Jun-04/7:27 AM |
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I hate it when I miss really good stuff like this.
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| Re: Turdzilla by Shardik |
9-Jun-04/6:50 AM |
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When is the book supposed to hit the shelves?
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| Re: a comment on Linger on by sliver |
8-Jun-04/7:10 PM |
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You're doing well. Keep going.
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| Re: a comment on mutiny by Bill Z Bub |
8-Jun-04/7:04 PM |
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| Re: Wedding Day by Caducus |
8-Jun-04/6:50 PM |
first read: swap -noticing and ignoring-
then- with wry misery (he's already exuding)
clambered? I think you mean -clammy?
doomed (seams)?
Um that's enough for now. I see serious problems but I also saw the whole picture, I do like it.
Particularly, arrogant wind and gray expressions sauntering. Work this one, it's worth it.
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| Re: The curse of language and other scattered thoughts by Y2kSlamPoet |
8-Jun-04/6:38 PM |
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Are you mocking me?! Because I KNOW how to tie my shoes, mistuh man. 8 for the rant but, shouldn't this be on psyche-ranker or maybe Philo-ranker? I dunno.
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| Re: Isn't it a wonder by caitydee |
8-Jun-04/5:59 AM |
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