Re: Broken Sonnet by Sasha	24-Jul-04/7:11 PM
This is: A: A practice in innovation? B: A practice at sonnets. (Doubtfully needed) C: A practice in detais. My unsuredness begets you a rank score.
Re: Sorry by shit	24-Jul-04/7:08 PM
This dog is rooting. I smell a deeply buried truffle. Do not become a fungus.
Re: a comment on Bad animal limericks by INTRANSIT	24-Jul-04/5:26 PM
2 rs', no?
Re: An Ode To Dark Angel, Private Investigator by tolstoyleo	24-Jul-04/3:22 PM
Still, spot on.
Re: Blobby Food** by MR Blobby	24-Jul-04/3:10 PM
I have to give you a compliment. Consistency.
Re: Respect on a Quiet Hillside by Dovina	24-Jul-04/3:05 PM
They did "it"? I think I get this but, I think it can be done better. Lines one and two are kind of telling, and for my own edification, why grandmums?
Re: a comment on Flying things by INTRANSIT	23-Jul-04/7:12 AM
What the hell are you talking about!? You can't pee in the snow! All you wind up doing is dragging it around in incomprehensible circles! goof.
Re: Terrorism Clean Up In Isle Three by Bachus	23-Jul-04/6:46 AM
To steal from U-2: " Throw a stone and hit someone guilty"
Re: a comment on Flying things by INTRANSIT	22-Jul-04/2:24 PM
And stanza 7 is wacko too. I would vote for richa, personally. thank you though. P'ranker helps keep me up to date somewhat while I play catch up on the road. Neruda is groovy. Just picked up some Kerouac and some Baudelaire. We'll see where it goes.
Re: a comment on Summer by Dovina	22-Jul-04/12:03 PM
no. much much nicer.
Re: a comment on Flying things by INTRANSIT	22-Jul-04/12:02 PM
If there's ever a place....this be it.
Re: Summer by Dovina	22-Jul-04/11:02 AM
love the cadence.
Re: The Two Temperaments of Man by dougsoderstrom	21-Jul-04/8:39 AM
I don't have these problems. I am a fence rider.
Re: Old Friends by sliver	20-Jul-04/8:09 AM
Well! Obviously you no longer need my help. Fine work.
Re: Southern Mississippii Standstill by wilco	20-Jul-04/6:18 AM
don't like cave-ins. Still, enjoyable.
Re: Never Ceasing to Amaze by wilco	20-Jul-04/6:14 AM
mmm-hmmm.
Re: a comment on Bankruptcy by INTRANSIT	19-Jul-04/3:05 PM
I liked the wordplay but it did seem as though I was sitting beneath a loom while the lion weaved his tongue into a throw rug. had to kill it.
Re: Ze invsible limerick by DR Limerick	10-Jul-04/3:57 PM
rrrrrrrrRRRRRRRIPOFF!!!!!!
Re: a comment on Bankruptcy (2) by INTRANSIT	6-Jul-04/5:18 PM
Yes, thank you. Applestrophes and I just don't get along for some reason.
Re: a comment on The Ocean Prefers A Sunset by wilco	11-Jun-04/6:29 PM
Rarely does. This current cut though, BOUNDS ahead of the first one. I like it much better.