replying on Bad animal limericks by INTRANSIT
24 Jul 2004, 5:26 PM
2 rs', no?
on An Ode To Dark Angel, Private Investigator by tolstoyleo
24 Jul 2004, 3:22 PM
Still, spot on.
on Blobby Food** by MR Blobby
24 Jul 2004, 3:10 PM
I have to give you a compliment. Consistency.
on Respect on a Quiet Hillside by Dovina
24 Jul 2004, 3:05 PM
They did "it"? I think I get this but, I think it can be done better. Lines one and two are kind of telling, and for my own edification, why grandmums?
replying on Flying things by INTRANSIT
23 Jul 2004, 7:12 AM
What the hell are you talking about!? You can't pee in the snow!
All you wind up doing is dragging it around in incomprehensible circles! goof.
All you wind up doing is dragging it around in incomprehensible circles! goof.
on Terrorism Clean Up In Isle Three by Bachus
23 Jul 2004, 6:46 AM
To steal from U-2: " Throw a stone and hit someone guilty"
replying on Flying things by INTRANSIT
22 Jul 2004, 2:24 PM
And stanza 7 is wacko too. I would vote for richa, personally. thank you though. P'ranker helps keep me up to date somewhat while I play catch up on the road. Neruda is groovy. Just picked up some Kerouac and some Baudelaire. We'll see where it goes.
replying on Flying things by INTRANSIT
22 Jul 2004, 12:02 PM
If there's ever a place....this be it.
on The Two Temperaments of Man by dougsoderstrom
21 Jul 2004, 8:39 AM
I don't have these problems. I am a fence rider.
on Old Friends by sliver
20 Jul 2004, 8:09 AM
Well! Obviously you no longer need my help. Fine work.
on Southern Mississippii Standstill by wilco
20 Jul 2004, 6:18 AM
don't like cave-ins. Still, enjoyable.
on Never Ceasing to Amaze by wilco
20 Jul 2004, 6:14 AM
mmm-hmmm.
replying on Bankruptcy by INTRANSIT
19 Jul 2004, 3:05 PM
I liked the wordplay but it did seem as though I was sitting beneath a loom while the lion weaved his tongue into a throw rug.
had to kill it.
had to kill it.
on Ze invsible limerick by DR Limerick
10 Jul 2004, 3:57 PM
rrrrrrrrRRRRRRRIPOFF!!!!!!
replying on Bankruptcy (2) by INTRANSIT
6 Jul 2004, 5:18 PM
Yes, thank you. Applestrophes and I just don't get along for some reason.
replying on The Ocean Prefers A Sunset by wilco
11 Jun 2004, 6:29 PM
Rarely does. This current cut though, BOUNDS ahead of the first one. I like it much better.
A: A practice in innovation?
B: A practice at sonnets. (Doubtfully needed)
C: A practice in detais.
My unsuredness begets you a rank score.